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Solaris1267
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2024-08-04 18:58

This was quite the interesting fan fic to read. The writing quality was bad at first, but the author was quick to change it, so he deserves an extra star for his effort. ⭐️⭐️⭐️+⭐️ Update stability is just right, but I hope he slows down a bit and improve the writing quality. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story development is where some things goes wrong, people are too shocked to Gojo’s abilities that it feels unnatural. Like for example, he doesn’t need air to breath in space. The phrase “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space”. If you’re a Star Wars fan, you would definitely know that isn’t the case. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It’s Gojo…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ World background is the same with the story development, lack of information. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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xander_zone
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thank you solaris at the end of phantom menace it will be explain in very detail that how he can breathe in space also i intend to upgrade gojo since yesterday i did search legends more detail than usual and theres something far more powerfull than yuuzan vong , jedi and sith , and the moment that gojo awakens his power that being should have notice the most greatest disturbance in the galaxy

xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

solaris can you point out which paragraph since im still new here which one the world background with lack of information

Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Ok first one is “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space.” That’s not true since space slugs, mynocks etc can breath in space. They even have their category called vacuum breathers, they could exist without a protective suit or life support. Some force users could even survive in space for a period of time, using the Force. So I don’t think they should be that surprised that Gojo can breath in space, since there is a way for force users to do the same thing but temporarily. 2nd “No Jedi has ever been this powerful” chapter 2. I think you should change it to “No Jedi alive has ever been this powerful”. Because I’m pretty sure there’s a ton of Jedi and Sith that are powerful if not more powerful then Gojo. In fact force abilities can bypass Gojo’s infinity, because the Force is the universe itself and if Sukuna can do it why not a whole universe. And I’m pretty sure a lot of people could do that Darth Revan, (full potential Darth Vader in dark dimension), Luke from legends, Galen Marek(Starkiller) also from Legends. You know what I think you should skip to legends. They had so many strong people there.

xander_zone:solaris can you point out which paragraph since im still new here which one the world background with lack of information
Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Or you could just ignore all of this stuff, and set the world where none of this exists. Because the Starwars is a huge franchise, I can’t keep up with it. So I understand your lack of information.

Solaris1267:Ok first one is “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space.” That’s not true since space slugs, mynocks etc can breath in space. They even have their category called vacuum breathers, they could exist without a protective suit or life support. Some force users could even survive in space for a period of time, using the Force. So I don’t think they should be that surprised that Gojo can breath in space, since there is a way for force users to do the same thing but temporarily. 2nd “No Jedi has ever been this powerful” chapter 2. I think you should change it to “No Jedi alive has ever been this powerful”. Because I’m pretty sure there’s a ton of Jedi and Sith that are powerful if not more powerful then Gojo. In fact force abilities can bypass Gojo’s infinity, because the Force is the universe itself and if Sukuna can do it why not a whole universe. And I’m pretty sure a lot of people could do that Darth Revan, (full potential Darth Vader in dark dimension), Luke from legends, Galen Marek(Starkiller) also from Legends. You know what I think you should skip to legends. They had so many strong people there.
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

im ngl i majorly dissagree with ylu saying dark revan is potentially stronger than gojo and force bypassing infinity how there was no description on how?

Solaris1267:Ok first one is “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space.” That’s not true since space slugs, mynocks etc can breath in space. They even have their category called vacuum breathers, they could exist without a protective suit or life support. Some force users could even survive in space for a period of time, using the Force. So I don’t think they should be that surprised that Gojo can breath in space, since there is a way for force users to do the same thing but temporarily. 2nd “No Jedi has ever been this powerful” chapter 2. I think you should change it to “No Jedi alive has ever been this powerful”. Because I’m pretty sure there’s a ton of Jedi and Sith that are powerful if not more powerful then Gojo. In fact force abilities can bypass Gojo’s infinity, because the Force is the universe itself and if Sukuna can do it why not a whole universe. And I’m pretty sure a lot of people could do that Darth Revan, (full potential Darth Vader in dark dimension), Luke from legends, Galen Marek(Starkiller) also from Legends. You know what I think you should skip to legends. They had so many strong people there.
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

thanks for the info i intend to add legends later also quigon and obi wan can make mistake when review their targets which i can take that as my advantage to my novel paragraph when in jedi council discussion , also if yoda ( current yoda in phantom menace on any version canon or legends ) fight againts young gojo ( young gojo in this fanfic which have limitless lapsse blue .wonder of u and recently ten shadows ) what would happen and who will win the fight according to your perspective ?

Solaris1267:Ok first one is “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space.” That’s not true since space slugs, mynocks etc can breath in space. They even have their category called vacuum breathers, they could exist without a protective suit or life support. Some force users could even survive in space for a period of time, using the Force. So I don’t think they should be that surprised that Gojo can breath in space, since there is a way for force users to do the same thing but temporarily. 2nd “No Jedi has ever been this powerful” chapter 2. I think you should change it to “No Jedi alive has ever been this powerful”. Because I’m pretty sure there’s a ton of Jedi and Sith that are powerful if not more powerful then Gojo. In fact force abilities can bypass Gojo’s infinity, because the Force is the universe itself and if Sukuna can do it why not a whole universe. And I’m pretty sure a lot of people could do that Darth Revan, (full potential Darth Vader in dark dimension), Luke from legends, Galen Marek(Starkiller) also from Legends. You know what I think you should skip to legends. They had so many strong people there.
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

thanks for the review achiless and add for the information for gojo barrier also can you give me a review on homepage also

ACHILLES:im ngl i majorly dissagree with ylu saying dark revan is potentially stronger than gojo and force bypassing infinity how there was no description on how?
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

also solaris i can add one more information since its already in chapter most souls stuck on space and gojo in this fanfic saw that those souls emit curse energy i think we both agree that plaguieis in chapter 13 wasn,t wrong when he sensed a third power has emerged ( curse energy) since gojo arrival did broke every balance on his own verse to the point the world it self needs to level up just gojo being born but thanks for the information , and when you say just forget this information and every review that you said about my mistakes just stick it to canon , i will say no , im a type that appreciate every review therefore im thankful that someone like you want to review on new story that want to emerge like my story but i will add legends elements later( AT THE VERY LEAST GOJO HAS AWAKENED ) since legends elements is similar like dragon ball fighthing , and on your own perspective since gojo will be noticable by abeloth it self can abeloth escape the maw temporary at least just want to talk to gojo please give me your suggestion

Solaris1267:Ok first one is “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space.” That’s not true since space slugs, mynocks etc can breath in space. They even have their category called vacuum breathers, they could exist without a protective suit or life support. Some force users could even survive in space for a period of time, using the Force. So I don’t think they should be that surprised that Gojo can breath in space, since there is a way for force users to do the same thing but temporarily. 2nd “No Jedi has ever been this powerful” chapter 2. I think you should change it to “No Jedi alive has ever been this powerful”. Because I’m pretty sure there’s a ton of Jedi and Sith that are powerful if not more powerful then Gojo. In fact force abilities can bypass Gojo’s infinity, because the Force is the universe itself and if Sukuna can do it why not a whole universe. And I’m pretty sure a lot of people could do that Darth Revan, (full potential Darth Vader in dark dimension), Luke from legends, Galen Marek(Starkiller) also from Legends. You know what I think you should skip to legends. They had so many strong people there.
Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Don’t sleep on the Force. The Force is stronger than you think. Force abilities render infinity irrelevant, because telekinesis ignores the “distance” part of it. Telekinesis is the ability to move objects without touching them, which bypasses space. So any Jedi could bypass Gojo’s infinity, they just need to be strong enough to beat him.

ACHILLES:im ngl i majorly dissagree with ylu saying dark revan is potentially stronger than gojo and force bypassing infinity how there was no description on how?
Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Infinity would be easily be bypassed by the Force, it has telekinetic abilities. Which ignores “distance”, which again make space irrelevant. So people people like, Darth Vader with his signature Force choke can bypass Gojo’s infinity. Now Master Yoda, I’m gonna choose legends Yoda. To be honest, since infinity is practically useless by now, Master Yoda could probably just grab him using the Force and throw him into space. But it’s fanfic Gojo that can breath in vacuum space, somehow with 10 shadows. If he uses Mahoraga to help him fight Master Yoda. I don’t think he would adapt to Master Yoda’s telekinetic powers from the force, as long as it’s not actively hurting him. So he could again throw him to outer space. Even if he does not do that, if Master Yoda just touches Mahoraga, he would know about all his weaknesses. Because he can’t be tricked, he can read through your soul and origin as well as your history. All of that from a single touch. So he would know about Mahoraga needing the fifth wheel to spin in order to adapt. Once he knows that it’s game over for Mahoraga. So even with the 10 shadows Gojo won’t be beating Master Yoda anytime soon. Now young Gojo vs Master Yoda. It won’t be even a fight since this is a young inexperienced Gojo vs a 900+ year old war veteran. I’m pretty sure Master Yoda with 900+ years experience can wipe the floor on young Gojo buffed up, it ain’t even a debate.

xander_zone:thanks for the info i intend to add legends later also quigon and obi wan can make mistake when review their targets which i can take that as my advantage to my novel paragraph when in jedi council discussion , also if yoda ( current yoda in phantom menace on any version canon or legends ) fight againts young gojo ( young gojo in this fanfic which have limitless lapsse blue .wonder of u and recently ten shadows ) what would happen and who will win the fight according to your perspective ?
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

Infinity would be easily be bypassed by the Force, it has telekinetic abilities. Which ignores “distance”, which again make space irrelevant. ( this one i can,t agree and everyone have their opinions including me however i will make atleast yoda and plagueis , (sidious still a newbie in the beginning xd) can bypass his infinity and thanks solaris i think im gonna make the main fight very interesting also thanks for your ideas on how yoda deal with young gojo )

Solaris1267:Infinity would be easily be bypassed by the Force, it has telekinetic abilities. Which ignores “distance”, which again make space irrelevant. So people people like, Darth Vader with his signature Force choke can bypass Gojo’s infinity. Now Master Yoda, I’m gonna choose legends Yoda. To be honest, since infinity is practically useless by now, Master Yoda could probably just grab him using the Force and throw him into space. But it’s fanfic Gojo that can breath in vacuum space, somehow with 10 shadows. If he uses Mahoraga to help him fight Master Yoda. I don’t think he would adapt to Master Yoda’s telekinetic powers from the force, as long as it’s not actively hurting him. So he could again throw him to outer space. Even if he does not do that, if Master Yoda just touches Mahoraga, he would know about all his weaknesses. Because he can’t be tricked, he can read through your soul and origin as well as your history. All of that from a single touch. So he would know about Mahoraga needing the fifth wheel to spin in order to adapt. Once he knows that it’s game over for Mahoraga. So even with the 10 shadows Gojo won’t be beating Master Yoda anytime soon. Now young Gojo vs Master Yoda. It won’t be even a fight since this is a young inexperienced Gojo vs a 900+ year old war veteran. I’m pretty sure Master Yoda with 900+ years experience can wipe the floor on young Gojo buffed up, it ain’t even a debate.
Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Alright, it’s your fanfic I’m just giving you information, on how characters in Star Wars bypass infinity. And it’s kind of a bad verse for Gojo to be in, cause anyone that can use the Force can counter infinity, since it has to have a mass, distance and not instantaneous for infinity to work. Unluckily for Gojo the Force has no mass or distance and it’s instantaneous. I mean Darth Vader force choked, a guy in a monitor which was millions or billions of miles away.(Star Wars: Episode V - The empire strikes back). I’m only saying this because I want Gojo to also use the Force, so he could have a Force shield to stop this from happening. Force shield is something like a passive ability the stronger the Force user is, the stronger the shield. That’s why Siths don’t always use this broken ability so often. So without the Force shield his like fodder to people like Darth Vader and Revan. Don’t blame me, blame the Force for being so overpowered.

xander_zone:Infinity would be easily be bypassed by the Force, it has telekinetic abilities. Which ignores “distance”, which again make space irrelevant. ( this one i can,t agree and everyone have their opinions including me however i will make atleast yoda and plagueis , (sidious still a newbie in the beginning xd) can bypass his infinity and thanks solaris i think im gonna make the main fight very interesting also thanks for your ideas on how yoda deal with young gojo )
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

allright thanks also have you read the new announcement maybe your opinions can make things more interesting

Solaris1267:Alright, it’s your fanfic I’m just giving you information, on how characters in Star Wars bypass infinity. And it’s kind of a bad verse for Gojo to be in, cause anyone that can use the Force can counter infinity, since it has to have a mass, distance and not instantaneous for infinity to work. Unluckily for Gojo the Force has no mass or distance and it’s instantaneous. I mean Darth Vader force choked, a guy in a monitor which was millions or billions of miles away.(Star Wars: Episode V - The empire strikes back). I’m only saying this because I want Gojo to also use the Force, so he could have a Force shield to stop this from happening. Force shield is something like a passive ability the stronger the Force user is, the stronger the shield. That’s why Siths don’t always use this broken ability so often. So without the Force shield his like fodder to people like Darth Vader and Revan. Don’t blame me, blame the Force for being so overpowered.
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Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Also don’t forget Darth Nihilus he destroyed worlds casually. I would like to see how Gojo deal with someone like him.

Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

Sure why not.

xander_zone:allright thanks also have you read the new announcement maybe your opinions can make things more interesting
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

how about deal with plagueis first allright since their presence is similar i heard he go to naboo planet just being there the climate change for a year

Solaris1267:Also don’t forget Darth Nihilus he destroyed worlds casually. I would like to see how Gojo deal with someone like him.
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

hey solaris have you check the recent chapter yet tell me what you think about it

xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

Hey solaris make a review on the battle chapter at gojo vs abeloth also what do you think of it ?

Solaris1267
Solaris1267Lv4

It was impressive, the use of clones, the domain expansion. I’m really excited for him to awaken, I hope the whole universe gets affected towards his awakening.

xander_zone:Hey solaris make a review on the battle chapter at gojo vs abeloth also what do you think of it ?
xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

solaris yoo list me 10 sith strongest in legends and old republicccc from weakest to strongesttttt i want to create the most craziest battle eeveryone ever seeeeee

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