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Artoriapendraragon
ArtoriapendraragonLv148mth
2024-08-02 21:55

Let me say as reader you writing is improving just one thing I want to I want you want to improve is world building , character development and one more thing is giving gojo more than just an edgy vibe you know what I say I right but anyway you writing definitely improving so don't give up.

Gojo Bizarre Adventure At Galaxy Far Far Away , jjk starwars crossover

xander_zone
4.3
67 Chs

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xander_zone
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thanks for the review i still dont understand world building but i understand kingdom building i will make gojo have his own faction or forces in the upcoming battle ( after Phantom menace that is ) also gojo edgy personality will be humbled after he awaken since his arrival disrupt the balance of the force it wont be just sith and jedi that will recognized it but something more will happen anyone who read legends know what im talking about

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xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

Artoriapendraragon read the important announcement it will be exciting if you can participate aswell

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xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

Artoria can you make a review on battle chapter that recently i post

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xander_zone
xander_zoneAuthor

yo artoria can you review on gojo honored one status and his current abilities also review my fight scene please

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