Don't even bother with this story, had a good start but turns into typical Chinese harem BS real quick. One chapter Maeve is normal towards MC and the next she wants to get 'under him' cause harem BS logic. MC has a good established romance that actually works, but F all that cause harem BS logic. MC meets a random female character and says one word to her, harem. Do not waste your time with this.

This makes no sense. Billy wasn’t watching hughie before he died, he would not be interested in him or even know about him if robin didn’t die. He was only interested in hughie because hughie was able to get into the vought building To make this more interesting this self insert should of been after a-train killed robin. There would be more tensions and story that way. Right now it makes no sense. Billy would not be interested in hughie.

this story had a premise, and the author ruined it with maeve randomly eye docking a.train, and then horrible, horrible use of chatgpt to write full chapters. one chapter legitimate just was about sam edgar and stillwell talking, with their thoguhts projected,.. sam edgar thinking was worse than chines mtl ai young master. just horrible.

I remember reading an A-Train reincarnation fanfic but it was never updated after 7 chapters my disappointment was palpable it was so good too a-train was going to become like the flash in speed with training. Now hopefully you can complete this fanfic I would like to see what you do different from the other a-train fic I had read.

I am loving this he has speed force no one in that world would be able to touch him. Now is he going to interact with the dc verse like if a multiverse event happens there would he also be affected by it and have to team up with the Justice League that would be pretty sick and he could have the flash help him on how to use his powers better.

just not great super op super fast for no good reason

it had great potentiall but author just made it do bad after chap 15 i stood hoping it'll improve even with the nonsense of starlight meeting translucent after almost being... by the deep then author made A train all emo over something he could've solved right away and and then said i changed my mind back again no harem just awful never gonna read this trash again

Author gave A-train speedforce, there's zero tension now. MC is either a Dharmann sketch character one second, then a White Knight hypocrite the next. I honestly don't know which one I hate more. Updates are okay.

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