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Soal_San
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2024-10-14 21:10

I can't speak for updates since it was done when I got here, so five. World background, it's a fic which is normally a 4, but there was an effort to give more depth to the usual setting, so 5. It's a TL, so I won't judge writing quality, and instead, I'll judge translation quality, 4 out of 5, there were minor mistakes, but it's not perfect, still well done though, and there are corrections in effective writing quality that make the TL better than the original. Story development, I'll give a 3 at best, it's a basic power trip fantasy fic, and it is short as far as finished fics go, so the story comes across as rushed at the end, more like the original Author was done but didn't want to disappoint by dropping. Character design, is a 3, as I said, it's a short power trip fic so there really isn't much characterization happening, as in, a Character gets established and doesn't have any growth for the rest of the story, with the MC having the most growth, but 43 chapters isn't a lot of room for anyone to grow. Overall, a 4 star bump TL of a 3 star fic.

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Thank you very much! Of all the reviews I have received, I think this one is my favorite.

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