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omiguh
omiguhLv43mth
2024-08-16 07:28

The translation is great but the story is meh. It’s just not logical. There’s no reason for everyone to hate the mc. At least make it logical, make is so they are not fond of him or there is clearly a favorite but it’s just dialed up to 11. Not to mention Voldemort is still alive but from the sounds of it the prophecy still got out and the mc younger brother is still famous? Idk, not a fan of the story but like I said, the translation is good. And it seems it may be one of those power fantasy novels. Apparently Harry can do 6th and 7th year magic as a child without a wand. Whatever, I’m not interested, oh and it looks like snape may actually like him

Invisible-a Harry Potter FanFic

PuddingLord
4.6
43 Chs

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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

thank you for the review, and you are sort of right, if harry acted like a normal child in a favourism household and lashed out the it would sort of make sense but remember the beginning. Brian, the perfect boy who could do no wrong, constantly framed Harry, and let me tell you, if you are constantly in trouble your whole life, people learn to mistrust and hate you.

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God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

is there romance

PuddingLord:thank you for the review, and you are sort of right, if harry acted like a normal child in a favourism household and lashed out the it would sort of make sense but remember the beginning. Brian, the perfect boy who could do no wrong, constantly framed Harry, and let me tell you, if you are constantly in trouble your whole life, people learn to mistrust and hate you.
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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

not really, at best there is a subplot of romance

God_of_hentai:is there romance
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God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

tbh i could care less if there is romance holy shit this is good the person who was the original up top DID NOT read far enough cuz HOLY SHIT its good asf

PuddingLord:not really, at best there is a subplot of romance
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PuddingLord
PuddingLordAuthor

Thank you God_of_hentai!

God_of_hentai:tbh i could care less if there is romance holy shit this is good the person who was the original up top DID NOT read far enough cuz HOLY SHIT its good asf
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Jeet_Chattopadhyay
Jeet_ChattopadhyayLv4

A great story with a really good translation and I hope you continue translating this and maybe even some of the other stories by the same author.

4mth

ahmedIprahim
ahmedIprahimLv1

هل يتغاضي المعلمون عن سلوك برايان بسبب دمبلدور ولا أفهم ف جميع الروايات التي قرأتها تقريبا دمبلدور شخص متلاعب وذكي لماذ في هذه الرواية هو غبي بهذا الشكلولا يفهم التلميحات مره عندما رأي طائر الفينيق التحول الخاص بهاري لماذا لم يربط هذا بالنبؤه تلميحات أخرى كثيره مثل عدم موهبه برايان وموهبه هاري المبالغ بها

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nerghomek
nerghomekLv4

A great translation, I hope you continue it, What is the name of the original author? It's a small doubt of mine, so I can give a review to the original author as well.

3mth
Soal_San
Soal_SanLv4

I can't speak for updates since it was done when I got here, so five. World background, it's a fic which is normally a 4, but there was an effort to give more depth to the usual setting, so 5. It's a TL, so I won't judge writing quality, and instead, I'll judge translation quality, 4 out of 5, there were minor mistakes, but it's not perfect, still well done though, and there are corrections in effective writing quality that make the TL better than the original. Story development, I'll give a 3 at best, it's a basic power trip fantasy fic, and it is short as far as finished fics go, so the story comes across as rushed at the end, more like the original Author was done but didn't want to disappoint by dropping. Character design, is a 3, as I said, it's a short power trip fic so there really isn't much characterization happening, as in, a Character gets established and doesn't have any growth for the rest of the story, with the MC having the most growth, but 43 chapters isn't a lot of room for anyone to grow. Overall, a 4 star bump TL of a 3 star fic.

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TemplisReaper
TemplisReaperLv15

I have never rewritten a review but this book deserves one. It has a unique twist to the Harry Potter books that I enjoy.

1mth
abner_Britto
abner_BrittoLv4

Good read and a good translation by the author 👍

2mth
Slayerzach
SlayerzachLv1

It was great till the author decided to rush the ending. the ending was completely out of nowhere and made absolutely no sense.

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God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

its so fucking good one of the best ive read

3mth
ZEN_F
ZEN_FLv4

amazing fan fic [img=recommend] one of few fan fic that truly make me read it again and again .

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