Item: "Football manager" system
Rating: 5

Abdrahman_BLLv11d

2024-11-14 17:19

I liked the story and events, just one problem is the updates, hope that he continue the story and not drop it

"Football manager" system

Best_Coach_9192

3.8

62 Chs

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QBLLv4

First of all, you did the unforgivable... calling football "soccer"! Next, let's be serious, who wants to read a manager's novel? If it's about a player, that would be another story.

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Estelem_ShelymLv13

Interessante ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Outalb_AbdrrazzakLv1

Nice story ... it's really about a new something ( Soccer manager ) , ... Also I like how the characters are designed .. I'm excited for the Upcoming conflicts and how our hero will face them ..

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DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Reveal spoiler

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BryndenRiversLv12

Characters are good but there are a lot of problems. For one the entire thing feels chatGPT-ish because nearly every other line is about how the MC is ready to face the challenges along the way or that he has such a great support system behind him... it became annoying after like the 5th time he said it in one chapter. Also the 10 year olds performing advanced football skills and shots are completely unrealistic. I can only read about a child performing a step over, feint, or precise dribbling and putting a ball in the top corner of the net before I just get annoyed that it's way too unrealistic.

2mth

Narciss84Lv4

So far so good hopefully you can keep it up mate

2mth

Bumbum420Lv4

its football you dumbss not soccer. murican cease your delinquent ways, just see the light be the one. kekw...

3mth

Best_Coach_9192Author

Hy I am the author, this novel's timeline is in 2027, so you will find some very well-known players in the story who finished their careers as a player and began their careers as a manager.

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AKHRIF_AYOUBLv3

Nice story, I like the character of the mc.

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