Item: "Football manager" system
Rating: 3

QBLLv43mth

2024-08-12 02:15

First of all, you did the unforgivable... calling football "soccer"! Next, let's be serious, who wants to read a manager's novel? If it's about a player, that would be another story.

"Football manager" system

Best_Coach_9192

3.8

62 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies3

Best_Coach_9192Author

Thanks for the review, but I think it's clear in the title that it's a manager's novel, so if you didn't like it, why did you read it?

3mth

QBLLv4

Sorry, I was searching a football player novel, I skipped the title and the description 🤣

Best_Coach_9192:Thanks for the review, but I think it's clear in the title that it's a manager's novel, so if you didn't like it, why did you read it?

3mth

Best_Coach_9192Author

HAHAHA you could go to see the match scenario (The eagles VS The giants) Give it a chance your maybe you could like it. For using soccer, it's because there is already a novel Football manager system, so I changed Football with Soccer, but inside the novel I use Football.

3mth

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Outalb_AbdrrazzakLv1

Nice story ... it's really about a new something ( Soccer manager ) , ... Also I like how the characters are designed .. I'm excited for the Upcoming conflicts and how our hero will face them ..

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DaoistyQNGiXLv14

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BryndenRiversLv12

Characters are good but there are a lot of problems. For one the entire thing feels chatGPT-ish because nearly every other line is about how the MC is ready to face the challenges along the way or that he has such a great support system behind him... it became annoying after like the 5th time he said it in one chapter. Also the 10 year olds performing advanced football skills and shots are completely unrealistic. I can only read about a child performing a step over, feint, or precise dribbling and putting a ball in the top corner of the net before I just get annoyed that it's way too unrealistic.

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Narciss84Lv4

So far so good hopefully you can keep it up mate

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Bumbum420Lv4

its football you dumbss not soccer. murican cease your delinquent ways, just see the light be the one. kekw...

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Best_Coach_9192Author

Hy I am the author, this novel's timeline is in 2027, so you will find some very well-known players in the story who finished their careers as a player and began their careers as a manager.

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Nice story, I like the character of the mc.

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I liked the story and events, just one problem is the updates, hope that he continue the story and not drop it

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