First of all, I want to say that I don't actually think the story deserves one star. This is given more for balance. The story is actually rather good, but not great. I can someone appreciate this inspiration from Elden ring making the main character after messmer but also just copy/pasting the dragon from elden ring went a bit too far into lazy territory, and became a negative. The story itself does have good qualities, but it's simply missing satisfaction. The story in the beginning constantly jumps around with the main characters age with zero explanation. One moment he's four, then he's eight, then 12, now 17. These time jumps happen with very little warning or explanation. It feels like many steps are just skipped over, leading to things feeling unsatisfying. Rather than seeing his growth, we only see the bullet points of it like the author is just trying to rush to the good stuff, and can't be bothered filling in the gaps. It is also rather unsatisfying that right after powering up and achieving his divinity, he just ends up losing twice right after that. Like I said, the story is good, but not great. I would normally give it about three and a half stars.

I found the story good but also a little bad because it can't make me want to read the next chapter, everything seems very monotonous but that could be because I read other novels with a much better level of writing that makes my judgment be like that but the theme really It's interesting but it didn't hook me that much, I stopped at chapter 16 but I still recommend reading it after all you might like it

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*Writing quality* 4/5 why because it's solid yes they are some grammar errors but it's something so small you wouldn't notice it *Story development* 4-2/5 it depends honestly on how you're gonna take the 500yrs sitting on the same spot because am embarrassed to show my face because I coiuldn't control my teenage anger *Character design* 1/5 The first 3 chapters tells you how the character will develop, he had some amazing growth as a person but after the nova incident everything about him it's a flop *Update stability* 5/5 the author is fast when it's comes to the initial chapters by to see after some time *World background* 5/5 It's marvel This is one way you can kill a story " I skipped the last 500yrs because I was bored 🥱 i will make something up to explain way he sat on the same spot for 500yrs and why his overpowered mother who is said to be the greatest mage didn't look for him why heimdall with his all seeing eye didn't see anything "

I don't want to write a long review, I read 5 chapters and found this book very boring and stupid. He acts like someone who hasn't time traveled. He is a foolish Earth lover, such heroes return to Earth at every opportunity and are maidens who sacrifice themselves for him.( G.T.)

it's good lots of time jumped but most of it are traveling, world background can have more improvement but the main problem for me is the update which I get why

Great story, good character development and the world is rather interesting (marvel with elden ring elements). As usual, there are some ChatGPT uses, but it's still alright.

it's a good novel though not for me. but please read maybe you would like it.

Very good and super cool idea. 10/10 would recommend.