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Mav_eriks
Mav_eriksLv42mth
2024-09-06 00:45

It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.

Primordial Villain With A Slave Harem

NecroBin
4.5
404 Chs

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NecroBin
NecroBinAuthor

glad you enjoy

2mth
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13

? Most novels don’t have hero complexes though? What are you reading? Also, having SLAVES is not just “living” Why do I get the feeling that your version of a “hero” is when a hero doesn’t rampage through a town pillaging?

2mth
Mav_eriks
Mav_eriksLv4

I meant in most of the novels, the MC has some sort of moral justice ( hero/savior ) and meddles in whatever scenario he encounters that he deems wrong. Like here when he saw the carriage being attacked, most MC would gladly try to save them especially the chunni ones and end up for the worse. And this is all fantasy work so you don't have to get all tangled up with having slaves is 'living' or not 'cause remember it's in a time where having slaves is acceptable, just depends on the person

DaoistArbore:? Most novels don’t have hero complexes though? What are you reading? Also, having SLAVES is not just “living” Why do I get the feeling that your version of a “hero” is when a hero doesn’t rampage through a town pillaging?
2mth
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13

The fantasy cop out only goes so far though. If an author writes 10 stories and all of those 10 stories feature things like slaves, S*xual assault, brothels; it’s definitely more than just fantasy. Same if a reader only reads novels where women are treated as toys. Furthermore, accepted is a pretty hard term to state here. Considering that slavery is a disease that is incredibly difficult to end. If you like reading fiction about slaves, it does say something about you as a person

Mav_eriks:I meant in most of the novels, the MC has some sort of moral justice ( hero/savior ) and meddles in whatever scenario he encounters that he deems wrong. Like here when he saw the carriage being attacked, most MC would gladly try to save them especially the chunni ones and end up for the worse. And this is all fantasy work so you don't have to get all tangled up with having slaves is 'living' or not 'cause remember it's in a time where having slaves is acceptable, just depends on the person
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NecroBin
NecroBinAuthor

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

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Hijak
HijakLv15

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

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LightYagami2000
LightYagami2000Lv13

A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.

2mth
Entomodachi
EntomodachiLv12

Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.

2mth
Daoist913668
Daoist913668Lv3

Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D

2mth
Synge64
Synge64Lv15

Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.

2mth
BlueberyTempest
BlueberyTempestLv3

Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?

3mth
Micke1
Micke1Lv4

Very addictive[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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DarkR1vers_Leander
DarkR1vers_LeanderLv4

great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..

2mth
Schmelkenboy
SchmelkenboyLv1

I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.

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