so the only critique you have is that it's a harem story? have you even read it?

That’s literally like saying “The only critique you have about this dish is the fact that it contains lethal dose of poison? Have you even tasted it yet?”

More like, you've ordered a lethal dose of poison (clicked on a novel with harem in name and tags) then whine about getting poisoned.

If harem isn t for you, move on, don t rage like a child, everyone has their own taste.

Harem is a genre, hating a genre is not grounds for criticism. You're the one trying to sound sophisticated by avoiding casual vocabulary when the content of your comment itself is nothing but brainless babble. Pseudointellectual tumor.

Correction. It's a parasitic genre. MC has a slave harem. Author might try to make it less bad, but it won't. It'll stay creepy anyway. Just go and talk to any girl irl and say it's your favorite book. Don't know if the story is good or bad though. All I can say is Iris artist needs to be paid well, cause she drippy af.

Have you read Reverend insanity

if u dont like harems dont read harem novels duh

Finding books that don’t have the harem genre on here is so difficult, they are so disappointing and disgusting. I like to read action and things like that but the harem just makes it rotten, I have stopped reading so many because of it. This one is shitty enough to have “slave” in the title and complain that you did not give it a chance. Typical male bahaviour to brainwash themselves and others that a few well chosen words and good aspects cover rot.

So I'm shitty because I asked a 1-star reviewer if he tried the book?

Forgive my blunder, it seems I was vague but i meant to convey that saying " u are a Reverend Insanity fan" to a girl will also won't make them have good image of u either

i am generic but with a diff account

looking at the reviewers posts they specifically look for harem novels to give 1 stars lol

I mean, I love harem, but there’s no such thing as a slave harem. That’s just slaves.

I just want to see some valid criticisms not that the story is a harem. Seeing a story be praised more than criticized while those criticisms are valid makes me want to read it. As of right now I would like more clear information.

Ah, 'parasitic', what a delightful word to throw around without actually understanding it. So, let me get this straight, harem is a "parasitic genre" because, what, it builds on an existing trope? That's how genres work, genius. By your logic, every mystery novel is parasitic on Sherlock Holmes, and every fantasy novel is leeching off Tolkien. Good luck defending that one. And do you genuinely think every single harem novel is just about an overpowered protagonist collecting women like Pokémon??? You do realize harem stories can vary wildly in depth and tone, right? Not every one of them is an "enslaved harem," unless, of course, you've just been skimming the trashier end of the pool. Newsflash, readers aren’t dumb, and harem novels aren’t some sinister plot to glorify unhealthy relationships, they're often explorations of human connection, choice, and, yes, sometimes power dynamics. But sure, reduce an entire genre to your oversimplified, edgy hot take.

Girls find anything they don t like creepy, it s a meaningless metric. This is a work of fiction, it doesn't affect you, move on, just like M move on when they see a cringeworthy and creepy W oriented "romance story" in which the premise is almost always them "taming" their love interest into an obedient servant. Novels are escapism, the whole purpose of fantasy is to engage in scenarios that do not reflect our current paradigm.

Taking advantage of the world rules for your own benefit regardless of what morals dictate is exactly what a villain would do. I don t understand why people like you can t just move on, instead of getting their panties in a bunch over a work of fiction. There are plenty of stories I don t like, including yours, I don t try argue it should be illegal for you to write those because the plot opposes whatever my morals are. Instead, I move on, because I respect the fact that plenty of people enjoy those, regardless of how I view them.

You can literally filter the tag out in the search bar. There are TONS of female oriented stories, with female mcs having any sort of love interest you can think of. And no one, literally no one, stops you from writing your own novels.

Your own novels cater to some form of sexual fantasy. Some novels are design to do only that, and that s okay. Some novels are not, and that s also okay. This novel has a plot, the "slaves" are not pokemons and are fully fleshed out characters with marked personalities. One is particularly ruthless, traumatized and brutal. Another is a lost puppy that normalized being treated like S and is being taught by the mc what it means to be cared for. etc etc "Grand purpose" is for heroes, villains are by definition selfish and doing things to cater to their wants. And if you don t like that, that s fine, move on. Otherwise we can do a psychological analysis of your stories and break down how any single action taken by your MCs highlight XYZ dynamic of oppression and the glorification of evil.