So, I'm writing this review after writing around 80 chapters. I'll make a few things clear and then you can ask your question in comment section. MC will be like a normal human and not some egoistic edgy mc so you can drop if you want that. Like kills everything he finds, takes any women just because she's hot and like that. You won't that in this novel. About the misunderstanding part. It's actually a small part of plot and not something major like mc is completely unaware of what his disciples doing and all. Now his women. So, he will take every women in his harem whom he sees have a good character, even if he doesn't love her, yet. After all, love can be bloomed later and character is the most important. He will kill man and women, all, for his sect and disciples. But there won't be situation where he kills only make disciples of a sect and takes all female. No, because Mc wants to build a family in his sect. Now, there will be yu.ri in the harem. What means that here? It doesn't mean romantic relationship between female leads but sexual interaction while MC is present and they're doing the deed. It's hot for me so I'm writing that. Now, will all of women be virgins? No. Most will but you have to understand that mc will take his women based on character so that's not a requirement tbh. However, he wouldn't take someone who's like Aphrodite and well you know what I mean. He'll take married women due to many reasons and honestly, that's okay since the character of the women would be good. (Sleeping around obviously isn't lol) Hehe, well this is mostly for a situation where mc will have mother daughter pair and I ain't writing that mother is virgin despite being a mother. It's completely illogical. So these are the points I wanted to make and if you feel like you don't like these, then please drop the novel. This isn't for you.
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Hello Author, I haven't read this yet, so I have a question. Is this sect a female-only sect? Also, just to be sure, there won't be any NTR for the MC, right?
Yes, it's only female sect. As for ntr, it depends on what you consider as NTR. If it's only fl doing the deed with other male character than mc? Then no. The fls will only love MC and no one else. You see, many people consider two fls playing with each other during 3some with mc ntr so yes, there will be this kind of ntr. But yeah, overall no
Aim_zx:Hello Author, I haven't read this yet, so I have a question. Is this sect a female-only sect? Also, just to be sure, there won't be any NTR for the MC, right?
Thanks for the reply. I will definitely read this.
GodOfLust:Yes, it's only female sect. As for ntr, it depends on what you consider as NTR. If it's only fl doing the deed with other male character than mc? Then no. The fls will only love MC and no one else. You see, many people consider two fls playing with each other during 3some with mc ntr so yes, there will be this kind of ntr. But yeah, overall no
you said the mc will take married women. Before i read, i have to know. Is this a loveless marriage, or is MC a homewrecker?
Aim_zx:Hello Author, I haven't read this yet, so I have a question. Is this sect a female-only sect? Also, just to be sure, there won't be any NTR for the MC, right?
if it's some Honey Boo Boo type marriage where the wife was forced because the husband has some status and power and threatened her, and she's constantly being abused by the Husband, then i can accept MC taking these kind of married women. But if the Husband and Wife are happily married with or without kids or even if they're at the early stages of falling out, and then the MC just swoops in and takes the wife, this i can't accept 😂😂 So which of the two type of Married Women is he going to take???
TheWandaShip:you said the mc will take married women. Before i read, i have to know. Is this a loveless marriage, or is MC a homewrecker?
Sorry, I just saw this comment. No, my mc ain't a homewrecker. He is a person who puts love and family above everything so why would such a person ruin a love life of another lol. As I said in the review, mc isn't your alpha sigma who will just take every hot girl because he wants to. You can rest assured, I'm sick of other authors who make fls as nothing but tools, lol. The married word can be of two ways actually. First obviously as you said that the women were forced in the marriage and abused. Mc will take them in the sect. The other is when the women have transactional marriages or like political. Like someone is married to a king and is part of his harem just for the sake of it. There is no love or anything. Then, if she falls in love with mc then he would take her in. That way lol. He won't destroy a relationship to get another women lol. I'm not writing for 15 years old edgy boys after all.
TheWandaShip:if it's some Honey Boo Boo type marriage where the wife was forced because the husband has some status and power and threatened her, and she's constantly being abused by the Husband, then i can accept MC taking these kind of married women. But if the Husband and Wife are happily married with or without kids or even if they're at the early stages of falling out, and then the MC just swoops in and takes the wife, this i can't accept 😂😂 So which of the two type of Married Women is he going to take???
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Bro, why are you using 'wuthering Waves' character as your novel female lead?
You got smth between a few and a lot grammar mistakes. Often really silly ones like writing a word big after a "," as example. Does your grammar gets better or do you plan to fix those?
I can't really say anything about improving part but I am planning to edit all chapters so hopefully these minor problems will be resolved. it will take time though as there are around 177 chapters so, I suggest you after some time. By then, I'll have my chapters edit. And thanks for checking out my book
Empyrium:You got smth between a few and a lot grammar mistakes. Often really silly ones like writing a word big after a "," as example. Does your grammar gets better or do you plan to fix those?
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author when are you gonna update your Naruto fanfiction
GodOfLust:*read
Yuri is NTR.
Isn't this supposed to be a wish fulfillment novel? Why is it full of tragedies and breakdowns?
Also, why complicate things for some weakling organization or sect? Hasn't he had enough realizations about the world? Why waste time and chapters.
is it dropped?
Are there lemon scenes and if so when is the first one and how frequently do they occur
