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I rarely use comments, so I forgot, I will reread some parts to understand them better, thanks for replying

Why does zhang fei keep biting more than he can chew? Like he is still a little weakling in the ten mortal realms and he is making contact and enemies with cultivators in the upper realms and even the realms beyond that. and he keeps depending on the power of his friends and other cultivators all the time and when trouble is over all of them prais him as if he has done everything alone and without him they would lose. Besides isn’t it normal for cultivators to go to seclusion for years? Why does it feel like all cultivators in the world ended their seclusion to bring trouble to him. And it feels like too much is happening while his cultivations feels slow even though you write the it has been a mont a year or whatever. But i feels like it has been more than that from how much he has experianced during that time. my last point is him being a troublemagnet is fine and all but in moderation bro. It doesn’t have to be in every place he visits, he has to deal with enemies, like when he went to the wasteland realms as a PET, those people from hua and huang clan started investigating him and others started paying attention to him but he is just a weak PET! Besides that everything is fine and i like the story , sorry if you’re offended with my criticism bro, just wrote how it felt while reading.

Hey author, amazing novel man, it's just that you are adding too many names for me to remember and focus on the novel. But overall, I like the novel.

Not related to this novel, but I really want to know. Are you going to write a novel as a sequel after max, his brother, and the family went to the tower? I would love to read that.

Thanks for the explanation, I kinda posted the same review twice because I can't see my review when I post it, thought the website is glitching.

I hoped it was longer , cuz it is pretty amazing and i am always expectant to see what technique he will make next. Suggestionn for such novels?

Is this novel dropped or what? I‘ve been waiting.

AMAZING, I hope you continue with a season 2, there is still a lot of potential! What is the enlightenment stone, the system, more interaction with his loved ones and disciples and a lot more.

Also, why complicate things for some weakling organization or sect? Hasn't he had enough realizations about the world? Why waste time and chapters.

Isn't this supposed to be a wish fulfillment novel? Why is it full of tragedies and breakdowns?