Wesam296

I wish the author would write Part 2 of the story, i still want to see the prosperity of the civilization and all the other stuff

The story is nice but a lot of things are making it pretty hard to read without brain damage. 1. why write 5 sentences when describing something that can be said in 1 sentence. 2. please stop calling every woman [. ] beauty, i really can’t keep up anymore and get confused which beauty you’re talking about. Just referring to characters by there names is fine. 3. after the initial cultivation it seemed like a slow paced novel while it was fast paced before.

I enjoyed this novel , unfortunately it seems that it was dropped :(

I rarely use comments, so I forgot, I will reread some parts to understand them better, thanks for replying

Hey author, amazing novel man, it's just that you are adding too many names for me to remember and focus on the novel. But overall, I like the novel.

Not related to this novel, but I really want to know. Are you going to write a novel as a sequel after max, his brother, and the family went to the tower? I would love to read that.

Thanks for the explanation, I kinda posted the same review twice because I can't see my review when I post it, thought the website is glitching.

I hoped it was longer , cuz it is pretty amazing and i am always expectant to see what technique he will make next. Suggestionn for such novels?

Is this novel dropped or what? I‘ve been waiting.

AMAZING, I hope you continue with a season 2, there is still a lot of potential! What is the enlightenment stone, the system, more interaction with his loved ones and disciples and a lot more.