Shameless review+1 I did this project as it is a fresh story with the mc not being a pirate or a marines just enjoys the world, which related to me. I recommend you guys to read it

OK, THIS NOVEL IS PURE GOL.D FUN TO READ ..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN ROBIN AND MC ..I HAD FUN READING THIS NOVEL AND WANT MORE SO THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THIS NOVEL AND PLEASE DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY THANK YOU

Shameless author here, casually giving myself 5 star review what do you expect in this novel : - legendary writing (I am the best so this is natural) - no mistakes - (no harem / harem) depends on your taste so everyone is pleased - i am actually the best author out there so yo're lucky reading this for free - this fanfic is perfect for your taste (an: this is not a transition, i did write the original in Chinese+ the synopsis is misleading don't read it + this is an alt account )

Very good and pleasent to read story about brother and his two little sisters (so far). Mc is lovely and op brother that takes care for his new family. Story is more like 'slice of life' and 'adventure' one, which for me is a great thing. He is not annoying trope mc (like young master, edgy brat or stupid heroic guy that wants to save all) which is even better.

SPOILER FOR CHAPTER 160+ and the reason I dropped it The MC (with 3 others) put a live broadcast, threat the Navy WG and made a deal, but then killed a CD and let the other 2 killing each other. WG somehow just let it go for "his threat is so scary, we have to let him go, uwee!!"

I really recommend this fanfic, it's a good read! There's only 1 thing I don't like about this fanfic and that is mc system. The system gives mc talents, no quest, no conditions, no nothing, it just appears from time to time and leaves after giving the price... Very convenient system for the author...

Comme il n'a pas les effet secondaire du fruit du démon tu peux avoir d'autres fruits du démon il peut se donner comme but d'être comme Superman , on comment par le fruit Jiki Jiki no Mi du magnétisme (éle ctromagnétism plus magnétisme🤯)le fruit du feu et le sublimer en fruit du soleil car comme on le sait le pouvoir de Superman viens de soleil, le fruit de la clairvoyance Giro Giro no Mi, le fruit de la force Riki Riki no Mi, le fruit du demon de la vitesse,le fruit du démon du fourneaux Gutsu Gutsu no Mi (après sublimation peut renforcer l extérieur et l intérieur du corps humain, plus Le Fruit d'Urouge est un Fruit du Démon de type Paramecia qui permet à son utilisateur d'absorber les dégâts qu'il subit afin de les convertir en puissance , Wapu Wapu no Mi fruit de la teleportation sublimer en logia contrôle de l espace parfait pour voler, contrôler les objets, se teléporter

The protagonist is the stupidest thing there is, he literally ate the lightning fruit, but he doesn't use it much because he prefers to use his sword, he is the most subnormal onepiece fanfic protagonist I have ever seen.

it's one of the best one piece fics that I have read so far, it is exrtremely well written and smooth , definitely a 5 star work