Shameless review+1 I did this project as it is a fresh story with the mc not being a pirate or a marines just enjoys the world, which related to me. I recommend you guys to read it

Shameless author here, casually giving myself 5 star review what do you expect in this novel : - legendary writing (I am the best so this is natural) - no mistakes - (no harem / harem) depends on your taste so everyone is pleased - i am actually the best author out there so yo're lucky reading this for free - this fanfic is perfect for your taste (an: this is not a transition, i did write the original in Chinese+ the synopsis is misleading don't read it + this is an alt account )

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SPOILER FOR CHAPTER 160+ and the reason I dropped it The MC (with 3 others) put a live broadcast, threat the Navy WG and made a deal, but then killed a CD and let the other 2 killing each other. WG somehow just let it go for "his threat is so scary, we have to let him go, uwee!!"

Very good and pleasent to read story about brother and his two little sisters (so far). Mc is lovely and op brother that takes care for his new family. Story is more like 'slice of life' and 'adventure' one, which for me is a great thing. He is not annoying trope mc (like young master, edgy brat or stupid heroic guy that wants to save all) which is even better.

I really recommend this fanfic, it's a good read! There's only 1 thing I don't like about this fanfic and that is mc system. The system gives mc talents, no quest, no conditions, no nothing, it just appears from time to time and leaves after giving the price... Very convenient system for the author...

Comme il n'a pas les effet secondaire du fruit du démon tu peux avoir d'autres fruits du démon il peut se donner comme but d'être comme Superman , on comment par le fruit Jiki Jiki no Mi du magnétisme (éle ctromagnétism plus magnétisme🤯)le fruit du feu et le sublimer en fruit du soleil car comme on le sait le pouvoir de Superman viens de soleil, le fruit de la clairvoyance Giro Giro no Mi, le fruit de la force Riki Riki no Mi, le fruit du demon de la vitesse,le fruit du démon du fourneaux Gutsu Gutsu no Mi (après sublimation peut renforcer l extérieur et l intérieur du corps humain, plus Le Fruit d'Urouge est un Fruit du Démon de type Paramecia qui permet à son utilisateur d'absorber les dégâts qu'il subit afin de les convertir en puissance , Wapu Wapu no Mi fruit de la teleportation sublimer en logia contrôle de l espace parfait pour voler, contrôler les objets, se teléporter

One of the most Chinese poisoned one piece fanfics I've read on this app, which is a bad thing if you don't know. I'll just leave an example here: the MC spent years being raised on Ohara, the most knowledgeable place in One Piece, but outright refuses to learn how to read and write their language because assumedly his Chinaman language is better, so he just ends up an illiterate dumbass. There's tons of stupid shit like this throughout this trash story, don't waste your time on it

I write this review as of chapter 187. The translation is ok, there are some mistakes here and there but the quality gets better and it's nice to read. The plot itself is good with no plot holes or the MC doing stupid and not logical things. Also the Golden Finger of the MC is not complicated and is easy to understand, and the most important the system is consistent and didn't have problems like in most Chinese fanfic. The only downside to this fanfic is that the author (not the translator) didn't continue to write cuz of health issues and the last chapter (187) is just him wrapping up the story quickly and abruptly. A real shame as the MC just started his conquest of the world... So in summary, I would definitely recommend this to any fan of One Piece fanfic, and I would like to thank the translator for all his hard work!