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Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv49mth
2024-07-17 20:30

The translation is fine, yes its a translation. The author for some reason doesnt explicity say it is and will only refer to the disclaimer. The author, whoever that might be doesnt know american culture and it shows heavily in every character interaction. This causes them to act unrealistcly and say weird things. He also gets vampire powers with none of the drawbacks for some reason. I dont have that much of a problem with this, but having it in the synopsis would be nice.

I am Peter Parker, but not The Spiderman

Haremlover807865
4.6
109 Chs

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Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

The author has now updated the disclaimer saying it's a translation.

9mth
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anurag_sharma_4885
anurag_sharma_4885Lv10

Bro what's its real name

9mth
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Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

Are you asking me what the original non translated fan fiction is called? How should I know, ask the author.

anurag_sharma_4885:Bro what's its real name
9mth
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Idealist
IdealistLv14

cant find it

anurag_sharma_4885:Bro what's its real name
9mth
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shadowstriker102
shadowstriker102Lv14

what do you mean two mexican burritos with milk is a perfectly American breakfast

9mth
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Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv14

moreover having a vampire physic with no weakness, but got easily tired after just 200 meter Sprint that's BS and show so much inconsistency, he should has a nearly infinite stamina tho

9mth
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isaiah_ramirez
isaiah_ramirezLv14

As a mexican-american, i must say, your words are sacrilege!

shadowstriker102:what do you mean two mexican burritos with milk is a perfectly American breakfast
9mth
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V_S242005
V_S242005Lv13

Idealist:cant find it
8mth
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Idealist
IdealistLv14

you are my hero. my man

V_S242005:
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8mth
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Zeroexe103
Zeroexe103Lv4

Can you post the link?

V_S242005:
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7mth
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THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14

I probably won't enjoy this one then. People not understanding American culture ruins good fic ideas

6mth
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EternalSolitude
EternalSolitudeLv4

Please, spare us. We don't want harem. I hope this reaches you, author

10mth

Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

There are basically no good fanfiction with just Gwen as FL please no harem remain faithful to Gwen.

10mth
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I personally prefer harem specially if it is Peter since with all the things he goes through he does deserve to get a harem of beautiful women though at the end of the day this is your fanfic so it's up to you. Glory to the cult of harem.

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Areswargod99
Areswargod99Lv14

Love it harem…………………………………………………………………..

10mth
Vastoking
VastokingLv6

SAY NO TO HAREM, honestly don't know why any author will want to risk ruining character interaction and making character have low iq in favour of having the mc with an harem, it ruins the characters especially if the characters are self respecting in the og work only fr them to just be an harem member with no other real contributions to the story and most harem authors end up making the female or the males very dumb. Never seen harem done right so best to avoid it if you know what i mean.

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SpiralCat
SpiralCatLv14

Author sama, could you please share the original/raw name of this novel with us? Thank you. I kinda want to read the original version because I like this story, beside that I want to know if this story is in hiatus or not by the original author.

9mth
Leo_Morgan_1997
Leo_Morgan_1997Lv4

What is the original name of the book?

9mth
ArkNova
ArkNovaLv1

Continue with harem! Peter parker deserves a harem but not exaggerated like more than 10+, please that' too much......................................

10mth
_anurag012
_anurag012Lv4

i would like to ask the author, with what materials and equipment did he make those drones. in my whole house i can't find such things. it was a good story for me, but i would say take it slow and let it develop. like if you made an arc of how he set his laboratory, how he procured the materials, how he develops, what are next inspirations, it would be better.

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