This doesn't seem bad, considering that it only has 6 chapters so far. The potential for greatness is there. Just keep the story clean and don't overly complicate things and you're good. Also, a little slide remark, please don't make this some overly 'tragic' story and at least let him have some friends to talk with. Helps to freshen up the content pool. All in all, can become something great, keep cooking. Cheers.
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