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gustavo_hhhhdsd
gustavo_hhhhdsdLv16mth
2024-07-06 04:11

the quality of writing is good so far, the story continues to seem very interesting, I just don't feel that this story will have an end, as authors almost always end up dominating these works (mainly because they don't have the story planned) I just hope that Keep going like this for at least 100 chapters and I'll be happy (yes, I don't have much hope that it will go beyond that)

Naruto: Just a Background character

Calm_Storm
4.4
51 Chs

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JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

Did someone say Toji?

6mth

Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

overall, it's not a bad fanfic. If the MC is given a personality, it would improve drastically. There are very few interactions or even monologues, therefore he's about as interesting as the terms and conditions of a PC game

5mth
kingGenovaGodfrey
kingGenovaGodfreyLv13

there's a lot of potential but the chapters are to short

6mth
yanyan_6515
yanyan_6515Lv4

Author i hope that MC looks like toji and be a menace like himl

6mth
ParadoxMind
ParadoxMindLv13

This doesn't seem bad, considering that it only has 6 chapters so far. The potential for greatness is there. Just keep the story clean and don't overly complicate things and you're good. Also, a little slide remark, please don't make this some overly 'tragic' story and at least let him have some friends to talk with. Helps to freshen up the content pool. All in all, can become something great, keep cooking. Cheers.

6mth
Aaron_Vittore
Aaron_VittoreLv4

ok just a few issues involving the Mc, the Mc is weak but stealthy enough that he shouldn't be found by even the hokage sarutobi, but somehow every person he fights has every possible means to finding an invisible character. it feels pointles for him to have this one skill because it doesn't do what it is supposed to. it feels like forced tension for no reason other than to draw out everything. that or the author thought him have a great invisible skill decided to nerf the main character without actually nerfing the main character, but by boosting every one else in some way.

5mth
Brent_6064
Brent_6064Lv4

this story frustrates me the more I read it so...

5mth
Abdul_Rahman_5112
Abdul_Rahman_5112Lv4

I see the potential author, js keep doing what your doing you got a good mc rn

6mth
lindre
lindreLv14

Writing is pretty good but the author has one of the worst story pacing i have ever read in my life. Massive turn off!

4mth
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