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There is a guy you can take inspiration from. Solid scedule, active community, decent writing style. Very steady. Name: Rastislav Story: Sorcerer's Tale Just a recommendation though. Do what you like.

Seems like I am the First one. Nice. Now, about this Story. This has some potential, I gotta say. While there are only 2 Chapters as of now, I can already tell that this going to be entertaining. Now onto some tips. 1. Pay attention to pacing. No big problem as of now, but it's still important to keep in mind. 2. Writing style. Very casual. Can be a vibe, but can get too boring after a while. So, keep it up, but don't do too much. Get serious when it has to and stay casual when nothing much is happening, or smth. Just keep in mind that everything in excess is bad, no matter what it is. 3. Upload scedule. Keep one. Set specific times to upload chapters. Can be once a day or thrice a week. Whatever works. Just stick to it and keep the rest of the Chapters on backlog. To have a fallback in case of IRL circumstances or because inspiration struck outa nowhere and you gotta lock in. Just don't burn yourself out. 4. No Bullshit please. I think we know what that means. Although I'm inclined to believe that that's handled. (Rant incoming) Why did I yap so much? Simple, I want stories to read. Good ones. I don't like when a good story gets discontinued or when it loses its potential. In conclusion. Keep writing. This site needs better fiction.

I never cared, nor do I know someone who does. Shit's ridiculous

In the case that the Author is reading this: About the lacking character descriptions. You can provide either illustrations, or comment on left out details. Preferably on the paragraphs themselves. Or create an auxiliary Chapter with them. Just try to not make the story feel like a fever dream and you're good. Probably.

This is definitely Great fiction. The story follows a reasonable pace of progression and the Characters are properly fleshed out. There isn't much bullshit here, if anything at all. The cheat's okay too. However, there are a few tiny little details that I'd like to address. 1. Grammar and Formatting. The Grammar in itself is alright, however, I have noticed that there are some issues with commas (,). Some sentences connect weirdly. Additionally, some of the MC's interactions are a bit too out of place with his identity (a kid). It's alright for him to be smart, but his vocabulary's a bit too complicated for a supposed child. It's quite the immersion breaker, and no World background can change that. There's also the issue that 'thought' and "speech" aren't properly distinguished. Use of AI should be avoided as well. 2. Strange lack of detail Now, the story doesn't actually lack much detail. However, I still have no Idea what the MC's Eye color is and a lot of characters don't have descriptions detailed enough to properly imagine them. This may be caused by AI interference, or a lack of oversight on the Authors part. Either way, this should be fixed one way or another. It fcks up immersion massively. P.S. The idea to put the Status panel at the End of every chapter is a good one. I'd actually prefer to see it in full detail, too. Since looking at those things is just that satisfying.

Might be Naruto

Probably Minato

Nah, this too much

This has a Harem tag btw. And people be talking 'bout 'Yuri' in the review section.