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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv137mth
2024-07-18 02:18

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

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PhoenixAsh
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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv13

thanks for replying[img=recommend]

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Mister_SPO
Mister_SPOLv4

Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc

PhoenixAsh:
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absolue
absolueLv13

The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

Mister_SPO:Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc
Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4

😂😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

Get out eunuch

Mister_SPO:Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc
Balkaran_Uchiha
Balkaran_UchihaLv3

G called him eunuch😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Where can read this without lockes on chapters?

I_Choose_Violence
I_Choose_ViolenceLv4

He's your father 👨 though

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs
mollyql
mollyqlLv1

eat shit loser

I_Choose_Violence:He's your father 👨 though
I_Choose_Violence
I_Choose_ViolenceLv4

I'll leave that to your dad

mollyql:eat shit loser
Feebas
FeebasLv3

you can read it using free pass.😓

DaoistjQtMkq:Where can read this without lockes on chapters?
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

That will take so much time to unlock chapters

Feebas:you can read it using free pass.😓
Feebas
FeebasLv3

that's how webnovel work. sad 😢

DaoistjQtMkq:That will take so much time to unlock chapters
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Is there no other way?

Feebas:that's how webnovel work. sad 😢
Minty_Squid
Minty_SquidLv14

$$$

DaoistjQtMkq:Is there no other way?
raizell24
raizell24Lv4

bro😂😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs
Void42
Void42Lv3

@Author can you describe character's appearance in a more detailed manner.

Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

🤣🤣

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs
Shaun_Wiffen_3076
Shaun_Wiffen_3076Lv15

Good book and enjoyable character that give a smile

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Noguenko
NoguenkoLv3

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

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