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blackstarreadsLv111mth
2025-01-14 20:50

read upto 300 chapters and the author has managed to kill everything that could have made the story special. the story becomes increasingly linear and follows the same chinese first disciple then master then comes hidden elder. the story stagnates so the author added unnecessary character insights that don't ever connect to the story at all. the mc is literally an immortal so at least time lapses could have been added to revamp the story line but at the end of the day this is one of the hardest troupes to write so i guess i can't criticise too much

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Jackson_0005Lv15

Nah bruh, thats false. Sure several die-not your typical shonuen trope. But several characters stay relevant. Chris, and several others. Linear kinda in a clan building way but there is a emphasis on a few characters. Read to chapter 611, and the author pulled a 180 in a good way.

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