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2024-12-01 03:21

The story is interesting so far, and the author seems to be enjoying writing it. The only aspect I see that needs improvement is providing more details about the system. However, the update speed is great and always makes me eager to read more. The work is great and exciting so far, and the author seems to be enjoying working on it. The only criticism I have is the lack of detail about the system used. Other than that, I liked the fast pace of the updates and wish the chapters were longer or more. The story has progressed great so far, and I feel the author is enjoying developing it. However, I think the story needs a more detailed explanation of the system. Other than that, I appreciate the speed of the update and always look forward to reading more.

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