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Glebby_Boi
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2024-07-28 21:02

This is a great ff with a lighthearted touch, which is quite a nice breath of fresh air compared to the other high quality Naruto fics. Hiruzen, so far, has been portrayed as a good-hearted grandpa and it would a lie to say that I am not happy with that. I am also pleasantly surprised with the writing quality, the comedic tone, the power scaling and overall vibe of the novel. In conclusion, the novel has potential to be one of the greats!!

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Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

Ps: in terms of the Hiruzen take, personally I’m just a bit tired of him being portrayed as a corrupt politician with low morals (although, rightfully so). The novel so far hasn’t expanded on that, but I am not mad about it. Reminds me of how I always do the guy when I watched the anime for the first time as a kid))

Desire96
Desire96Author

Yup, Hiruzen is still the corrupted politician, but we are watching it from Sora ‘s Pov, so he is seen as a kind grandpa, tbh, I dislike the idea of Hiruzen and clan heads good and Danzo bad… this irks me for some reason as life is not black and white but rather grey , so I try to be diplomatic in they terms, glad you are liking the novel so far, the peak of novel is approaching ie ch 25(ch81-84), I hope you look forward to that as I definitely am

Glebby_Boi:Ps: in terms of the Hiruzen take, personally I’m just a bit tired of him being portrayed as a corrupt politician with low morals (although, rightfully so). The novel so far hasn’t expanded on that, but I am not mad about it. Reminds me of how I always do the guy when I watched the anime for the first time as a kid))
Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

Thank you for the heads up and I’m super excited for what’s to come!! Looking forward to seeing how Sora will (potentially) face-flap the soul out him))

Desire96:Yup, Hiruzen is still the corrupted politician, but we are watching it from Sora ‘s Pov, so he is seen as a kind grandpa, tbh, I dislike the idea of Hiruzen and clan heads good and Danzo bad… this irks me for some reason as life is not black and white but rather grey , so I try to be diplomatic in they terms, glad you are liking the novel so far, the peak of novel is approaching ie ch 25(ch81-84), I hope you look forward to that as I definitely am
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Desire96
Desire96Author

Glebby_Boi:Thank you for the heads up and I’m super excited for what’s to come!! Looking forward to seeing how Sora will (potentially) face-flap the soul out him))
Desire96
Desire96Author

Did you like ch 25(81-84) ? please don't reply too directly as it would be a spoiler for readers, (Also reread your comment)

Glebby_Boi:Thank you for the heads up and I’m super excited for what’s to come!! Looking forward to seeing how Sora will (potentially) face-flap the soul out him))
Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

You didn’t lie when you said that they would be same fun chapters)) Although, ch84 had me stressed😬

Desire96:Did you like ch 25(81-84) ? please don't reply too directly as it would be a spoiler for readers, (Also reread your comment)
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Desire96
Desire96Author

Hehe

Glebby_Boi:You didn’t lie when you said that they would be same fun chapters)) Although, ch84 had me stressed😬
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Propht
ProphtLv4

Can you be a bit more specific on this because there is generally 2 versions of hiruzen in fanfics 1. The worse then Danzo version or 2. The nice grandpa who can’t even count his fingers and neither one really fits how I ever viewed him. The best version of hiruzen I have seen was from The Wind Calamity who’s only tried to be the best leader he can for years whatever good or evil he had to commit but in his later years especially after the nine tails attack, he’s tired and doesn’t want to enter another war while he’s hokage so he made a couple bad decisions and mistakes. Basically to sum it up just how much of a corrupted politician is hiruzen in your fic?

Desire96:Yup, Hiruzen is still the corrupted politician, but we are watching it from Sora ‘s Pov, so he is seen as a kind grandpa, tbh, I dislike the idea of Hiruzen and clan heads good and Danzo bad… this irks me for some reason as life is not black and white but rather grey , so I try to be diplomatic in they terms, glad you are liking the novel so far, the peak of novel is approaching ie ch 25(ch81-84), I hope you look forward to that as I definitely am
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Desire96
Desire96Author

You can assume it as wind calamity one for now , some actions will change how you perceive him later probably , I was too inflened by wind calamity at the time of writing as the plot holes and character designs and depth is good dealt in wind calamity

Propht:Can you be a bit more specific on this because there is generally 2 versions of hiruzen in fanfics 1. The worse then Danzo version or 2. The nice grandpa who can’t even count his fingers and neither one really fits how I ever viewed him. The best version of hiruzen I have seen was from The Wind Calamity who’s only tried to be the best leader he can for years whatever good or evil he had to commit but in his later years especially after the nine tails attack, he’s tired and doesn’t want to enter another war while he’s hokage so he made a couple bad decisions and mistakes. Basically to sum it up just how much of a corrupted politician is hiruzen in your fic?
H20Pierce
H20PierceLv14

I mean yea sure the world isn't black and white and the clan heads are definitely not saints. But they did not ruin every single genius to come out of konoha or even turn them against konoha entirely like Danzo did.

Desire96:Yup, Hiruzen is still the corrupted politician, but we are watching it from Sora ‘s Pov, so he is seen as a kind grandpa, tbh, I dislike the idea of Hiruzen and clan heads good and Danzo bad… this irks me for some reason as life is not black and white but rather grey , so I try to be diplomatic in they terms, glad you are liking the novel so far, the peak of novel is approaching ie ch 25(ch81-84), I hope you look forward to that as I definitely am
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Desire96
Desire96Author

Arguable, they prolly would if they had the reach and freedom as Danzo

H20Pierce:I mean yea sure the world isn't black and white and the clan heads are definitely not saints. But they did not ruin every single genius to come out of konoha or even turn them against konoha entirely like Danzo did.
H20Pierce
H20PierceLv14

what do you base that theory off of?

Desire96:Arguable, they prolly would if they had the reach and freedom as Danzo
Desire96
Desire96Author

Hmm, tell me , how do you think one becomes a clan head, do you think best ninjas are from main lineage only?

H20Pierce:what do you base that theory off of?
H20Pierce
H20PierceLv14

I mean strength. We are talking about the world of naruto. Strength is everything in the shinobi clans. Name me one clan head who somehow became clan head by scheming against their competitors. Obviously danzo doesn't count.

Desire96:Hmm, tell me , how do you think one becomes a clan head, do you think best ninjas are from main lineage only?
Desire96
Desire96Author

It wasn’t elaborated much in the story to judge, but I am gonna use hyugas as example to generalise, not as extreme but yea

H20Pierce:I mean strength. We are talking about the world of naruto. Strength is everything in the shinobi clans. Name me one clan head who somehow became clan head by scheming against their competitors. Obviously danzo doesn't count.
H20Pierce
H20PierceLv14

hyugas are disgusting but that's it.

Desire96:It wasn’t elaborated much in the story to judge, but I am gonna use hyugas as example to generalise, not as extreme but yea
TreadwayHeinrich
TreadwayHeinrichLv2

I totally understand your point about presenting Hiruzen this way, and I appreciate that the novel shows the complexities of the characters beyond the simple dichotomy of good and evil. This touch of gray adds depth and makes you feel the diversity of thoughts and situations. I’m so glad I’m enjoying what the novel has to offer so far, and I’m so excited to reach the climax in the upcoming chapters! I’ll definitely be waiting impatiently for chapter 25.

Desire96:Yup, Hiruzen is still the corrupted politician, but we are watching it from Sora ‘s Pov, so he is seen as a kind grandpa, tbh, I dislike the idea of Hiruzen and clan heads good and Danzo bad… this irks me for some reason as life is not black and white but rather grey , so I try to be diplomatic in they terms, glad you are liking the novel so far, the peak of novel is approaching ie ch 25(ch81-84), I hope you look forward to that as I definitely am
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Desire96
Desire96Author

Bro, peak was ch 81, it has been more than 3 months since it got released

TreadwayHeinrich:I totally understand your point about presenting Hiruzen this way, and I appreciate that the novel shows the complexities of the characters beyond the simple dichotomy of good and evil. This touch of gray adds depth and makes you feel the diversity of thoughts and situations. I’m so glad I’m enjoying what the novel has to offer so far, and I’m so excited to reach the climax in the upcoming chapters! I’ll definitely be waiting impatiently for chapter 25.
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