It's ok. I am reviewing it bit early since it has a lot more chapters now. The story seems to be heavily AI assisted. But no that does not affect the quality of writing. There are some usual overly descriptive aspects or some recurring sentences and scenes likely due to AI influence. But on positive side the language is good and I did not see any grammar or pronoun issues. I have rated the story average on some aspects because repeatedly MC talks about things he should not know at that point of story. Information is mentioned which again should not be present at specific point of story. Then there are some logical gaps which lead to situations that shouldn't be possible like how MC casually sits in a class he is not part of but the teacher knows him. Or how a very poor Naruto can somehow manage to make expensive purchase. That bothers me a bit
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lol, I don’t know which instance you are taking about, but if nobody sells anything to Naruto, then where would his money go? Anyway, my bad to not expand on that properly. Happy that you are invested in the story to criticise it as constructive criticism really helps to improve my writing and you were also civil about it, so brownie points from me lol
