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AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv14mth
2024-11-16 05:12

Esto Tiene romance ? o nada ? ( Completando el minimo de palabras asi que ignora todo esto y sigue con tu vida , es enserio ignora esto no tiene nada que Le doy 0 estrellas a webnovel x esto :V )

DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan

GarudaTranslation
3.6
270 Chs

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OtherShore_Asura
OtherShore_AsuraLv2

Honestly, that last line with Not needing a System simply because he's Gohan just hit the feels man. Hopefully, it works out well in the future chapies and derail in to the mess most other DBZ fanfics make.

6mth

GodCrimson
GodCrimsonLv4

Well its lacking in in depth story and character dev, emotion etc. its good if you like to read db fanfic it should be. mc will be op and its just kinda smooth for him i don't like manuplating author its like whole world is trying to kill mc i dont like thag kind of story but this is kinda too smooth haha

6mth
zen_garden
zen_gardenLv4

Great fanfic of Dragonball 🐉🎱 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🤪

6mth
Bolder_Folder
Bolder_FolderLv14

How DOES THIS BOOK HAVE SO LITTLE VIEWS??? PEOPLE YOUR MISSING OUT

9mth
dankoku
dankokuLv4

Honestly amazing compared to other dragon ball fanfics. MC is put into Future Gohan a day after he died, a great premise. No lusting after every girl on sight like other fics, he's inherited gohan's personality and memories, and is able to hide his knowledge of the future well. Would recommend, 10/10.

9mth
the_king0134
the_king0134Lv4

it's actually pretty good, i mean it's decent better than most would recommend

9mth
reva20p4
reva20p4Lv4

It's good that's all I can say [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

9mth
OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv14

starting was interesting. author had some Idea what he was doing. but just after a few chapters everything was superficial. Videl was introduced to soon. why ..??? .... --reincarnation, woke up as grown but weak Gohan, messed the original time line of dragon ball super without giving a single thought or mention. still weak compared to orginal Gohan at that time ( who could fight Buu) .no future plan . CHAPTERS WITHOUT TITLE my personal issue - i completely lost interest when Gohan told namakian dragon his wishes 😒. this was first time for him summoning a dragon since earth's one was destroyed. and he asked 1st immortality, 2nd don't remember, 3rd cordinate for planet Yardrate. ( planet namik's cordinates were hidden so he asked king kai for that but for Yardrate 😒).

3mth
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Far better than the rating would suggest. Which is strange.

4mth
EditorBr0701
EditorBr0701Lv4

I read up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 32) and I say it's a great read, without boring systems or crazy tricks, just good old effort and use of logic, after all, if the MC already has all the knowledge of the plot the most the correct thing to do is to use it. So far 9/10, hope it stays that way, looking forward to more updates.

9mth
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