Item: HP: Spirit Talker
Rating: 3
Author: BlkRabbit

BlkRabbitLv45mth

2024-11-12 20:51

Either English isn't the author's first language, or he's using AI to make this novel, or maybe both. I would have rated it lower had I read it more, but I gave up more than a few ten chapters in with how horrible the writing is (It's like reading premium MTL, with all of the shitty format but none of the grammatical errors). If my review hasn't been deleted yet, then at least the author isn't shameless enough to hide the abomination inside this novel.

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