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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv410mth
2024-06-24 22:05

it's an overall interesting story. The story progression is interesting. The writing quality is also amazing. But it'd be better if you consider paragraphs while writing the story and I'm still not sure if the story would ever get to hp

HP: Spirit Talker

Molakar
4.0
401 Chs

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Molakar
MolakarAuthor

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. Storylines about the Russian and American magical world will appear in the near future. Only after this the protagonist will visit the UK and meet with canonical characters. You can read more on Patreon, there are already 103 chapters.

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truedevil
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to me this story is ok but all i get is a slave to a clan whose mother was ra pe. seems like to me that all he is going to be is a slave.

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Powwll
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Reveal spoiler

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Taoist_Boomslang
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It's basically unreadable. The sentences are glued together to the point of hurting the eyes. The whole thing reads like someone who put chinese trough machine translation but didn't bother to put the text correctly.

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NoNameOrLife
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I like your novel but it makes no sense why is he like the biggest pushover in existence he is like izuku from mha like your world building is nice your story is nice but why is the mc so weak in character he just lets everyone push him around and just says some snarky one liners like bro...

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Sami_Alfoheday
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the chapters are long and it is different from regular fanfics

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Lomtic
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Overall not bad, but not enough) The chapters are large and I have already seen POV from different characters several times. I like it! Author please keep writing!

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tzeentchstories
tzeentchstoriesLv1

Interesting beginning. Usually the story of HP begins in Britain, but here in Japan, and from the second chapter everything is quite beautifully written, I’m looking forward to the continuation.

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Ulabasu
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Reveal spoiler

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plodeat
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Really good, looking forward to future updates [img=recommend] good

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