Item: HP: Spirit Talker
Rating: 3
Author: Powwll

PowwllLv49mth

2024-08-04 05:25

ALMOST everything was good , but the dialog just sucks , i dont know who is talking or even when someone is talking ... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

HP: Spirit Talker

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