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mrpaper_
mrpaper_Lv110mth
2024-06-26 12:51

I love this story, it's been great so far. You just need to correct the mistakes. Otherwise, this is a great read. Great fanfic. There are more chapters on Patreon

HP: Spirit Talker

Molakar
4.0
401 Chs

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truedevil
truedevilLv4

to me this story is ok but all i get is a slave to a clan whose mother was ra pe. seems like to me that all he is going to be is a slave.

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Powwll
PowwllLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Taoist_Boomslang
Taoist_BoomslangLv4

It's basically unreadable. The sentences are glued together to the point of hurting the eyes. The whole thing reads like someone who put chinese trough machine translation but didn't bother to put the text correctly.

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NoNameOrLife
NoNameOrLifeLv3

I like your novel but it makes no sense why is he like the biggest pushover in existence he is like izuku from mha like your world building is nice your story is nice but why is the mc so weak in character he just lets everyone push him around and just says some snarky one liners like bro...

7mth
Sami_Alfoheday
Sami_AlfohedayLv14

the chapters are long and it is different from regular fanfics

10mth
Lomtic
LomticLv1

Overall not bad, but not enough) The chapters are large and I have already seen POV from different characters several times. I like it! Author please keep writing!

10mth
tzeentchstories
tzeentchstoriesLv1

Interesting beginning. Usually the story of HP begins in Britain, but here in Japan, and from the second chapter everything is quite beautifully written, I’m looking forward to the continuation.

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Ulabasu
UlabasuLv14

Reveal spoiler

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plodeat
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Really good, looking forward to future updates [img=recommend] good

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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv4

it's an overall interesting story. The story progression is interesting. The writing quality is also amazing. But it'd be better if you consider paragraphs while writing the story and I'm still not sure if the story would ever get to hp

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