overall the author did good just nitpicking here since he was poor you should understand that he would not limit himself to his past
the food he treats as his favorites should not be limited to the Indonesian food
like this mindset : when poor I can limit my spending at restaurants like KFC and McDonald i would not buy much unless it's a special day
but what if i have more than enough money then nationality can be left behind. from sushi and other seafood to the signature food of other countries just the ability to be able to eat them would bring spiritual satisfaction
now think with the convergence of cultures and hectic work he had to do to support his sister just the exploration of the different culinary masterpieces would be a relaxing and fun thing that would go beyond just nationality.
and patriot acts a limited to those the government has helped and had a positive impact on not the poor even if they hit middle income they had no parents to influence their decision so the growth even when helping others include ensuring family safety and mental health
Thank you for your constructive review. I am very happy considering this is my first book.
You are very right, my mind is still limited to the scope of Indonesia. I forgot important points about exploring other countries such as typical food, culture, music, etc. This is very much needed in Slice Of Life.
Very good advice, I will apply it in the next chapters. [img=recommend]
