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RagingMutant
RagingMutantLv152mth
2024-09-12 11:48

Story was okay but it’s super frustrating to read. I stopped at chapter 29 because most chapters aren’t separated into paragraphs and there are random sections of a black colored text that is hard to read when you are using darkness mode. The author said he formats correctly and that webnovel is the problem but support isn’t helping him. Which is fine ig, it just makes it way to frustrating to read so I give up.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Rene_Tokiori
4.3
199 Chs

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Rene_Tokiori
Rene_TokioriAuthor

this is the Author, my novel is based on suspense. so please don't be so rude to discredit me claiming that you don't understand the novel while you read 3 chapters. for the others who support me happy reading.

3mth

Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15

First I need everyone to know that the writing style of the author is probably the best I have ever read on WebNovel. The entire novel is so well written and so detailed that you can easily picture the scenes as you read. The characters are wonderful, with realistic personalities and thoughts. Just in the first 50 chapters I have watched the MC grow with his circumstances evolving into the "Apex Predator" he is becoming. The characters around him also have their own personalities special traits that make them more interesting instead of feeling like bots implanted. I couldn't be more happy with this story and author, he seems to understand what true fantasy/action/magic/isekai readers want in a novel with those main tags. He hasn't given into the complaints by the same people (Harem Haters) who never continue supporting any novel regardless of harem or not. I predict this story will be in the top 5 by the time it hits 300 chapters. So come read this incredible story and support.

3mth
mark_reads
mark_readsLv2

Now this is what i call a good novel! The world building peak, action amazing and the culture supreme. thank you author for the novel give us more chapters please.

4mth
javawolfpack
javawolfpackLv15

Story could be good but excessive impossible to read formatting issues that haven’t been fixed in a month, not sure if the author eventually figured out what was causing them so they don’t happen later but it’s impossible to read as the text is forced to a small size and fixed color and doesn’t respond to the app theme info. Sounds like WebNovel support sucks at helping them fix… but I dropped due to this, which is sad as was enjoyable beyond that.

3mth
Ethan_Verdier_6345
Ethan_Verdier_6345Lv14

Author knows why . Fix your chapters before uploading.

2mth
Jesse_Boyer
Jesse_BoyerLv15

First off, the story itself it very good. The only problem I have with it is how descriptive it is. It is almost like the author took a thesaurus and word vomited on the page. It almost feels like searching for word count by overly describing the most mundane details. Again the story is good. It’s just the writing is difficult to stomach sometimes.

3mth
Bartholome
BartholomeLv2

It is an engaging and unique fantasy novel. The plot of David manipulating the world he's transported into is captivating. The antihero theme adds depth, though some pacing issues and predictability detract slightly. Overall, it's a thrilling read that keeps you hooked. looking forward for new updates

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R3MYISGOATED
R3MYISGOATEDLv1

The fact that it takes a lot of skill to create true[img=gift]beauty is understatement of how much hardwork and ingenuity put into this wonderful book...Keep Going!!!❤️🙏🏽🇰🇪

3mth
Louisz_wambulwa
Louisz_wambulwaLv1

I love this . keep it up author. I'm so hooked 🇰🇪

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Undying_Reader
Undying_ReaderLv4

The story is good, i just hope that it won't get dropped.

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