Item: THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR
Rating: 2.2
Author: javawolfpack

javawolfpackLv157mth

2024-08-14 14:40

Story could be good but excessive impossible to read formatting issues that haven’t been fixed in a month, not sure if the author eventually figured out what was causing them so they don’t happen later but it’s impossible to read as the text is forced to a small size and fixed color and doesn’t respond to the app theme info. Sounds like WebNovel support sucks at helping them fix… but I dropped due to this, which is sad as was enjoyable beyond that.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

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Hakkun_KenLv3

bro did author fix it?

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Slushy_ApolloLv15

Author hasn’t bothered to fix any of it and the only acknowledgment I see from him is comments saying he improves after chapter 25

Hakkun_Ken:bro did author fix it?

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