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Frank_Lee_Junior
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2024-06-17 17:27

Although I have had some previous experience in writing a novel, it is not much, I would say almost nonexistent. Read the novel, and if you have time, let me know what you think in the reviews. Comment below if you have any questions, and I will get back to you as soon as possible.

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UnKnownEntity001
UnKnownEntity001Lv14

How much of the story is slice of life and focusing on alchemy and how much is action/adventure. I’m always hesitant to start a SoL novel that’s also tagged with A/A because usually the SoL becomes irrelevant quickly.

Frank_Lee_Junior
Frank_Lee_JuniorAuthor

The initial idea is to maintain a good balance between slice of life, alchemy, and action. For the first 50/100 chapters, there will be little to no action and more focus on alchemy, so the novel will lean more towards slice-of-life. As for after the first 100 chapters, I can't really promise anything because the plot will evolve over time, and depending on how it goes, I might have to change things accordingly.

UnKnownEntity001:How much of the story is slice of life and focusing on alchemy and how much is action/adventure. I’m always hesitant to start a SoL novel that’s also tagged with A/A because usually the SoL becomes irrelevant quickly.
UnKnownEntity001
UnKnownEntity001Lv14

That’s good to hear I just hope alchemy doesn’t become irrelevant in the story. So many stories use “crafting slice of life” to draw readers in but within 30 chapters there is hardly any actual crafting involved.

Frank_Lee_Junior:The initial idea is to maintain a good balance between slice of life, alchemy, and action. For the first 50/100 chapters, there will be little to no action and more focus on alchemy, so the novel will lean more towards slice-of-life. As for after the first 100 chapters, I can't really promise anything because the plot will evolve over time, and depending on how it goes, I might have to change things accordingly.
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UnKnownEntity001
UnKnownEntity001Lv14

I’ll give it a read later

Frank_Lee_Junior:The initial idea is to maintain a good balance between slice of life, alchemy, and action. For the first 50/100 chapters, there will be little to no action and more focus on alchemy, so the novel will lean more towards slice-of-life. As for after the first 100 chapters, I can't really promise anything because the plot will evolve over time, and depending on how it goes, I might have to change things accordingly.
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Hein_Htet_San_5314
Hein_Htet_San_5314Lv2

good novel

ShowmikBD
ShowmikBDLv4

is there romance?

Frank_Lee_Junior
Frank_Lee_JuniorAuthor

yep, but not very soon. at least not in the first 200 chapters. At most, in these chapters I will lay some groundwork for a future relationship.

ShowmikBD:is there romance?
Di_fuyi
Di_fuyiLv4

Is it harem ?

Frank_Lee_Junior
Frank_Lee_JuniorAuthor

as of now, no. in the future? not sure as I'm going with the flow.

Di_fuyi:Is it harem ?
Di_fuyi
Di_fuyiLv4

Ok thanks

Frank_Lee_Junior:as of now, no. in the future? not sure as I'm going with the flow.
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