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Gato_Bolado
Gato_BoladoLv25mth
2024-06-17 10:03

Honestly I liked the story, but it's clear that what we're reading is like a diary where the protagonist narrates his life, there's no dialogue, no thoughts or even written interaction, the protagonist simply states that something happened as if he was remembering an old story of his life, honestly I never got a Game of Thrones story that was truly good, but this one had the potential if it was written as a story, and not as a diary of his own. events.

The Elden Lord /ASOIAF

Ash_D_Born
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27 Chs

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Miami_XM
Miami_XMLv13

Might be a bit tough. Sages mind is a supercomputer, a supercomputer surpassing Ultron. That kind of capacity regardless of what it's utilized for is out of place for a setting like GoT. That talent could've been something else more efficient if you just wanted combat capability. But now you've got a mega mind Mc who's not doing much mega minding. Mc is only as smart as the author's ability to portray a smart character, and it's definitely not here.

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First_Time_Anal
First_Time_AnalLv14

If you haven’t already read Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GOT) then you should read it it’s one of the best GOT fanfics out there

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Little_El
Little_ElLv3

When I heard what power X had, I was excited, it was disappointing, for a modern man it is really idiotic , he has a submissive mentality, his biggest dream is to be under the yoke of a lord despite that reputation, that wealth , he's an idiot, he's embarrassing when he tries to approach someone bigger than him politically , the story is difficult to read, It's written like a bad script .The conversations are shrill .

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Cryotivity
CryotivityLv13

author doesnt finish any of his stories, so i cant be bothered

5mth
DevSticks
DevSticksLv4

I have no idea why there aren’t more bad reviews. 1. The main character is wildly inconsistent with his power usage and only remembers to use them when they are needed for the plot and continently forget them as soon as a plot point needs to be introduced. 2. The pacing is all over the place and new characters are mentioned and forgotten the next paragraph making the attempt building of seemingly meaningful character connections and the general flow of character interactions/Dialogue is cancer to read. 3. The story is for the most part narrated to you and is more of a ’tell’ rather than ‘show’ method of storytelling making it a story that is hard to feel exited about or feel any connection to the main character. Overall the concept seems like it would be a very interesting story/setting but the execution form what I have read is poor. I do hop the author takes this in to account for any further FF’s as these are not mistakes in writing you should ignore if you hope to get better. No hate author just pointing some things out I hope you have a good day futher and keep improving your writing.

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Ash_D_Born
Ash_D_BornAuthor

Mandatory five stars from the author here!

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DaoistOfSI
DaoistOfSILv1

All of your other novels are far better than this one you should have continued them instead of this novel. mc is idiot and hypocrite. for all his powers he wants to be a submissive one and also he had the help of north at the begining and after he ran away everything should belong to him in his opinion

3mth
Neko_6969
Neko_6969Lv4

Romance ? or no romance?Single female lead or harem .?

5mth
Jonathan_Moriarthy
Jonathan_MoriarthyLv4

Absolute waste, giving him the Powers of a Inventor And Not allowing him to industrialize? dropoed after 1/2 of the first chapter

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Topo_15
Topo_15Lv4

Main character has a lot of power and yet is somehow a coward who does nothing, he’s also a CUCK which makes everything even worse. So much for “destined death”

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king_of_kings666
king_of_kings666Lv4

Interesting idea but what a disappointment. If you are okay with nerfed and idiotic mcs you are fine.

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