When I heard what power X had, I was excited, it was disappointing, for a modern man it is really idiotic , he has a submissive mentality, his biggest dream is to be under the yoke of a lord despite that reputation, that wealth , he's an idiot, he's embarrassing when he tries to approach someone bigger than him politically , the story is difficult to read, It's written like a bad script .The conversations are shrill .

Honestly I liked the story, but it's clear that what we're reading is like a diary where the protagonist narrates his life, there's no dialogue, no thoughts or even written interaction, the protagonist simply states that something happened as if he was remembering an old story of his life, honestly I never got a Game of Thrones story that was truly good, but this one had the potential if it was written as a story, and not as a diary of his own. events.

author doesnt finish any of his stories, so i cant be bothered

I have no idea why there aren’t more bad reviews. 1. The main character is wildly inconsistent with his power usage and only remembers to use them when they are needed for the plot and continently forget them as soon as a plot point needs to be introduced. 2. The pacing is all over the place and new characters are mentioned and forgotten the next paragraph making the attempt building of seemingly meaningful character connections and the general flow of character interactions/Dialogue is cancer to read. 3. The story is for the most part narrated to you and is more of a ’tell’ rather than ‘show’ method of storytelling making it a story that is hard to feel exited about or feel any connection to the main character. Overall the concept seems like it would be a very interesting story/setting but the execution form what I have read is poor. I do hop the author takes this in to account for any further FF’s as these are not mistakes in writing you should ignore if you hope to get better. No hate author just pointing some things out I hope you have a good day futher and keep improving your writing.

Mandatory five stars from the author here!

Absolute waste, giving him the Powers of a Inventor And Not allowing him to industrialize? dropoed after 1/2 of the first chapter

Romance ? or no romance?Single female lead or harem .?

Why start a story when the author doesn't keep his promises and constantly abandons the story? The story has been restarted four times, with abandonments lasting several months in a row. I've had enough.

Main character has a lot of power and yet is somehow a coward who does nothing, he’s also a CUCK which makes everything even worse. So much for “destined death”