UrbanGrafix

Missing the end of the sentence here

Can’t tell if it’s a translation or not but the grammar is awful. Spelling mistakes galore really take you out of the story.

You’re

NGL I’m just skipping these chapters, the joker decision completely ruined this part of the story. Hope this bs ends soon

Danneel? Don’t you mean danerys

Harry Potter but develop it further, dig into the world, go to space he’ll start an empire. It’s hard to find good extensions of the hp world where people take it beyond the story

It gets 100% worse later on. The dipshit of a writer gives him 3 billion system point and he’s doesn’t buy teleportation and keeps flying everywhere on a plane, he doesn’t protect his family, is too cheap to spend a few thousand point on a new pod apparently and just leaves shit loads of points and lottery in his system. The writer is very dim witted on that front and there is no general cohesive thought to the overall story, it’s one shiity whim to another

100% love another halo fanfiction. Hell I won’t like everything but it’s great that you’re here

I agree, not a fan. Seems really forced