BUMGUMI RAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! POTENTIAL MAN! TRAITOR MAN! THE TRUE VILLAIN OF JJK! GO BACK TO CONSERVATIVE LY WHITE SPLASHING ON YOUR TSUMIKI HAIR DOLL INSTEAD FRAUDGUMI!!!!

Rabbit Escape Solos The Verse. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH BUMGUMIIIIIIIIIIIII DOMAIN EXPANSION - CONSTANT L'S A THOUSAND MAHORAGA SUMMON ATTEMPTS RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Best jjk story I have ever read. It really does make Megumi stronger without a lot of plot armour. It shows an amazing dynamics between the characters. And great detailed explanations that I didn't feel like it is info dump. A grammar that might as well be the best here lol. All in all I would highly recommend reading it .

you can tell the author is inexperienced. it's just filled with exposition dumps and poor character dialogue, and the story itself isn't breaking any records, with silly character decisions and plot contrivance's everywhere. Nobody is developed, the author relies on our knowledge of the source material for that. it's just a huge mess. it needs serious revisions from the first chapter to even be considered a 2* piece of work.

hmm....till where I have read it shows great potential and has a good story written I hope the author doesn't drop the fic.

Hello Junior's, Truly I've seen lots of Jjk Fics And this one has Lots of 'Potential'(get it?) Anyways Great This deserves stars from the Ancestors Of the Ancestors of the oldest Reviewer's sect in webnovel.

Pretty GOAT'ed. It's got everything I want, good grammar, and a good plotline. The characters are written well and there are sufficient lobotomy references.

Without a doubt it’s peak fiction

Initially I wanted to wait for the end of the fanfic to leave a review, but since you asked for the last chapter, I'll do it now. First off, I don't know if this is your first fanfic, but I would like to say that either way it's an incredible work. If this is actually your first fanfic, it only makes things more impressive. The writing is great, the characters don't act OOC (a problem I've seen in a lot of fanfics) and the story development is impeccable. My favorite thing about it is the way you wrote Ten Shadows. Incarnation is absolutely peak and the use of shikigami is great too. For anyone seeing this review without having read the fanfic, read it. You will definitely not be wasting your time and will have a lot of fun. Peak fiction 👏🏻

it's peak