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2024-10-24 23:06

Initially I wanted to wait for the end of the fanfic to leave a review, but since you asked for the last chapter, I'll do it now. First off, I don't know if this is your first fanfic, but I would like to say that either way it's an incredible work. If this is actually your first fanfic, it only makes things more impressive. The writing is great, the characters don't act OOC (a problem I've seen in a lot of fanfics) and the story development is impeccable. My favorite thing about it is the way you wrote Ten Shadows. Incarnation is absolutely peak and the use of shikigami is great too. For anyone seeing this review without having read the fanfic, read it. You will definitely not be wasting your time and will have a lot of fun. Peak fiction 👏🏻

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HeliosTheDepressedAuthor

it is my first work, you can tell by how awful the first 8 chapters were. i really didn't know what i was doing back then XD And thanks for the kind words, they mean a lot to me! I'm Glad I could make your day even a little bit better!

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