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2024-08-01 16:55

A solid below average novel i really dont like mc‘s that have no agency and for the first 7 chapters the mc is just a bystander. That’s the part that feels like filler since having the mc not being able to take action in the beginning of the novel feels very unsatisfactory. That’s the mc has to become a psychopath to regain control like just make her a psycho why all this unesessary she’s evil bc of her skill. Like in tensura your skills follow your personality and not the other way around. And then we got our evil mc that will bring destruction to anyone the author can think about at the moment. In my opinion this kind of character only works as a support or antagonist bc if we see too much of them it’s getting boring.

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Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajAuthor

So just like everyone you judged a book with 60+ chapters 1.5 of its chapter Sure I appreciate your "thoughtful" review

Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajAuthor

I'm so tired of these revuews based on that 1.5 chapter 😒 😑

Falsic
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First impressions are everything. That's why authors spend so much effort making them engaging. I haven't read this book, but your attitude (not this review) has told me everything I need to know about what to expect inside. I'll pass.

Vidhan_Bhardwaj:So just like everyone you judged a book with 60+ chapters 1.5 of its chapter Sure I appreciate your "thoughtful" review
Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajAuthor

Oh sure good for me ! I'm just tired of people without patience

Falsic:First impressions are everything. That's why authors spend so much effort making them engaging. I haven't read this book, but your attitude (not this review) has told me everything I need to know about what to expect inside. I'll pass.
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