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Keiou_OwloLv310mth
2024-06-12 21:21

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

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