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This one is also really cool
How is he different from Jon Snow? Both are bastards who don't like to be called that, both want to prove themselves, both have anger issues and want to solve everything with more anger. Grumpy all the time, there is a woman in the family who doesn't like him, this woman's children like him, except one. Am I forgetting something? I feel like I'm forgetting something.
There are many characters who are OCs. Even those who are canon because they exist, like Hinata's mother or Neji's mother, they are practically OCs, since Kishimoto didn't determine anything about these characters. We know they existed, but we don't know anything else about them. What I mean is: It's going to be hard work to manage so many original characters. These characters are part of the harem. But I hope you can do it.
It's kind of annoying, to be honest. No one can stand to be around someone like that for even a second. Even if it's just temporary.
I think this is an excuse for not thinking of a better way to gain an identity and create economic power on your own. You took the easy route. No offense.
Something he can achieve on his own with a few months of using Grey Matter and Upgrade to create an identity, then create a company with money, apps or games. Maybe even hack criminals' accounts. But no. Let's trust the guy who would sell his city if it meant getting what he wants. Really cool.
So he's about 20 or 25 years before Canon. If he's 25 now, when Canon starts he'll be 50 years old. More or less.
You can't just throw us a ball like that and walk away!
Opinions, my friend. That's how it works. Everyone has their own. I liked it, you may not have liked it, and that's okay.
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