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Damn! Stopping the scene at this exact moment is comparable to turning off the TV at the time of a penalty kick.
I prefer Annabeth. Beautiful, smart and strong. Madelyn Cline.
Sally's "death" was a bit forced, but that's okay. Will Annabeth be the romantic partner? I always imagined her as Madelyn Cline.
Hey! Great chapter. This chapter clearly shows the impact on the story with John's presence. Hope's development and the way she interacts with and motivates him is super interesting to follow. I hope their relationship continues like this. It would also be nice if, because of John's presence, the Mikaelson family appeared more in Hope's life. Or she can participate more in their lives. That's also an option. It would be great for her accelerated development and for everyone's relationship. In addition to eliminating her hero syndrome.
This story is great. The character is an excellent player who dreams super big, but who doesn't? He is very arrogant and his attitude seems to get worse as fame and confidence sets in. I really don't like this attitude, but he's a teenager. A teenager who is gaining a lot of attention. He'll probably grow as the chapters go on, but I just wish he wouldn't do anything stupid. I don't know if the story will have any romance, but I'm already casting my vote. •Sadie Sink •Emma Myers •Hailee Steinfeld •Sophie Turner •Emília Clark •Millie Bobby Brown Any of them. The first three because they would be my first choice. The other three because they are British. Now, if you already have someone in mind, I would like to know. The story is amazing. Don't forget it.
There was a small error. You put that he was 19 instead of 16. Normal error.
Well? Isn't he provocative? But I think that will only last until he plays a few more games. It's quite annoying when a player provokes.
So far so good. As any kid who grew up watching soccer and dreaming of playing, I understand the feeling when you realize you can't do it. Or when your parents don't believe or invest in you. So the story is going very well for me and for anyone who loves the sport.
It's kind of frustrating. I'm not sure what's going on. It's like when you're dreaming, but you think it's real, and at the same time you're sure it's a dream. Like I said before. Frustrating.