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cryzsalix
cryzsalixLv48mth
2024-09-14 12:46

I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Frowfy
4.7
45 Chs

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cryzsalix
cryzsalixLv4

My only complaint would be not having a ton of chapters to read right now.

8mth
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Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

Thank you for the long review! The thing of found a "gem" is awesome lol, it's the second person to say that. I'm very happy being well reviwed by another author, this was my first attempt. I hope we can stay together for a long time and thank you again.

8mth
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TheDarkReader
TheDarkReaderLv4

I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it

8mth

Frowfy
FrowfyAuthor

Author here. This is my first attempt at writing, I'm open to constructive critics. I couldn't find a good and long fanfic about S.U, so I decided to create one. This is the result of my consistent hard work. I will improve everyday. I apologize any inconsistence or grammar mistake, I hope you can enjoy this and remember about the good times of Steven Universe again.

11mth
Binge_Reader69
Binge_Reader69Lv2

finally a steven universe fic, will there be romance and if so please tell me its lapis

10mth
Zinkoro
ZinkoroLv12

As a die-hard fan of this wonderful work of Fan-Fiction. I give it 5 stars. Seriously speaking, I love stories that take the trouble to give details of the interactions between the characters, how they think and that. It is ESSENCE.

7mth
Zyanid_Warfare
Zyanid_WarfareLv4

Awesome fic, I love the idea and the MC is so interesting… I love the way it’s going and I’m hyped for more, absolutely no complaints… Just please don’t drop it… even if you only updated once every other week, doesn’t matter how fast or slow the updates come as long as it keeps going cuz I’ll see the end eventually as long as it doesn’t stop

10mth
chief321
chief321Lv4

5 stars because of steven universe fic pls don't drop I like it so far keep up the good work ..........................................................

11mth
Vitor_Ribeiro
Vitor_RibeiroLv1

Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise

8mth
SomeRandomReader_
SomeRandomReader_Lv14

Its honestly one of the best fics i’ve read in a while and well on the way to best if it only had more chapters

9mth
flashfirewave
flashfirewaveLv11

I hope eventually she does get to move in to the house of crystal gems

7mth
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