Item: Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
Rating: 5
Author: Vitor_Ribeiro

Vitor_RibeiroLv18mth

2024-09-14 23:11

Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Frowfy

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45 Chs

Liked by 6 people

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FrowfyAuthor

Thank you for the review! I'm happy you liked it heheh (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

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