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Renol_devin
Renol_devinLv135mth
2024-11-12 11:31

This one started spectacularly. First 100 chapters were good. It was then the problems began to stick out like a sore thumb. First problem was slow pace. Because of slow pace, progression is slow. Repeatations were quickly noticed. Coupled with updating stability it's not very enticing to wait for next chapters. Character design was also lacking. Find mc's parents very annoying. They just worry about everything without any useful inputs. Their existence is only justified by increasing length of chapters were author will mention how worried they were. Author has good knowledge about football intricascies. So reading this is somewhat worthwhile. I was looking forward to time when mc can harness momentum and become a playmaker. But it hasn't reached there yet.

Echoes of Greatness: The Rise of a Global Football Sensation

GxDesailly
4.7
188 Chs

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GxDesailly
GxDesaillyAuthor

Thanks for your review and you are right the parents aren't really the focus in this book that's why you will see that you don't see them that much in the story.

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This story unlike others I've read where the protagonist is given a system which will give him the skills of the most famous and talented players in history, this one changes this because although the protagonist has something similar these skills are only earned with dedication and self effort.in the opinion of a fan reading fan stories this story deserves my rating.

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I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"

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DaoistBoundless_57
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GxDesailly
GxDesaillyAuthor

Hi there, I'm the one who published this story. Can you rate this story or comment if you see any mistakes? Seeing what you think will motivate me to edit more because this story has over 1000 chapters so we still have a long way to go before the end. I'm not making any money doing this, but I want to do it anyway because I have a lot of free time.

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Anthem_9
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I'm already very advanced in the RAW but the novel is good, I didn't think I'd find it here with a good translation, keep updating who started reading it here go ahead and wait, the MTL isn't very nice...

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great novel great novel great novel

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Jason_Sawali
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He, he another football novel found. It's interesting, l hope it will not be just one or two chapters

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Raisku
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muito bom, continue assim.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jason_Sawali
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l edit my past review, this novel is a 5 stars novel. l loved reading the story and how Yang Yang progress: not too fast and not slow either, the perfect balance.

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DaoistBoundless_57
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This is my third review for this novel and l am up to the current chapter and l have only one thing to say: WOW! l already liked this story when l read it with mtl, but now with proper grammar and correct names, it's a thousand times better. Now I don't have to search the internet for every misspelled name trying to guess the correct one. The story was already good but I think you added a little depth and meaning to the story with all the descriptions and everything you added. it's like it's a different story, if someone doesn't believe me, you can try and go read the mtl version and you'll see it's completely different.

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