This is my third review for this novel and l am up to the current chapter and l have only one thing to say: WOW! l already liked this story when l read it with mtl, but now with proper grammar and correct names, it's a thousand times better. Now I don't have to search the internet for every misspelled name trying to guess the correct one. The story was already good but I think you added a little depth and meaning to the story with all the descriptions and everything you added. it's like it's a different story, if someone doesn't believe me, you can try and go read the mtl version and you'll see it's completely different.
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