Renol_devin
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Renol_devin10 days agoReplied to linh_lemoncultivation: taking things to extreme
- Renol_devina month agoPosted
It didn't feel like i was reading a novel. It has style of time skip chapters in ordinary novels. Coupled with very short chapters, the pace of the novel is something else.
- Renol_devina month agoReplied to Renol_devin
do it in moderation. don't think all other players are idiots.
- Renol_devina month agoPosted
It had a nice concept. But the pace of the story is so fast. He scores two or three goals in everymatch, even though he is only seventeen years of age. It absolutely kills concept of progression. If he scores like that from the start what would happen ten years later? Scoring hatrick and double hatrick every game?
- Renol_devina month agoCommented
amazing start
- Renol_devina month agoPosted
I liked the idea of abandoning Chinese national team. At least i don't have to watch china win three or four worldcups. But translation and writing quality are bad. After a while it became unreadable.
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- Renol_devina month agoCommented
what kind of trash skill is this? imagine if he became a starter. Then isn't he useless after first ten minutes? Also football is not all about shots and dribble If the system can actually improve his basic skills to a good degree that would have been an excellent starter pack.
This book has been deleted. - Renol_devina month agoCommented
translation is just so-so. just slightly better than mtl.
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