You know I hated the premise Yang Kai older brother but I pushed through it even the comments and the way you truly take level him up then make some excuse (pills, refining etc) to bring his cultivation back down. I also ignored you going with the most boring common weapons instead of something new and unique. The biggest issue is that you basically take the things the original MC opportunities and have your MC take it when he does not need it. You made your MC a selfish hypocritical betraying leech. Taking the black book which 95% is wasted on your MC instead. Not only that your MC didn't find the book but just took it from Yang Kai. Oh but your MC gave him some pills BS. Those pills are nowhere near worth the book value to him. Not only that but you are going to take every single opportunity the original MC had which as a so-called brother is just evil and spiteful despitful. Your MC and writing are on par with Tang san and the author Douluo however he at least had some originality. You are also just forcing romance making the system give you rewards to help get a girl. No originality, no morales, forced plot, overall a subpar fanfic I do not know why it has some many high ratings oh wait it is just bots for the most part.
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