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Supreme_Genesis
Supreme_GenesisLv35mth
2024-10-07 01:03

it's good but annoying how u made the mc heal for so long but others can heal in just days and breakthrough at the same time, if you think you are making the mc too strong too quick, don't worry atley for me that's what I want to see and u can just make him act weak if it's required to achieve his goal, but only if the situation is suitable, also he has the best constitution I don't think just anyone should be able to perceive his realm, it should always come with some passive buffs, which can also give him a pass to any secret realm restrictions . Also don't stop I am giving u stones daily for the last 2 days👍, so keep up the good work. And last don't make his dao companions so close to his cultivation he has so much hax and if they can still keep up with him it's just frustrating honestly, i don't care how much more time and energy he needs for his solid foundation bs, keep them 2-3 small realms back now that the realms will have 3 stages. Well it's your fic at the end of the day so just take the one's u see fit if any at all. I will support this work nonetheless 👍

Martial Peak: Chaos Dragon Emperor (V.1.0)

Chaos_DragonKnight
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111 Chs

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Funny_Gamer_3397
Funny_Gamer_3397Lv1

This guy expressed my thoughts exactly

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Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1

Don't drop pleaseeeee! We need at least 1 complete martial peak fanfic.

9mth

Chaos_DragonKnight
Chaos_DragonKnightAuthor

Author's shameless review.🙂🙂 The story will be an AU, but will not be too far apart from the original. As i still want some events to happen as they did in the original,e.g. the opening of the inheritance cave,e.t.c. the characters except the OCs do not belong to me so their characteristics(not personality) will remain the same. I will try to update one chapter everyday, unless there is a problem or something urgent comes up I will keep up with the updates. I do not plan on dropping the fic. {Note: If you like the fic please send me some power stones, it helps keep me motivated🥺. Also if you have any suggestions for the fic, you just have to message in the comment section.}

9mth
Muntazir_Malik_1420
Muntazir_Malik_1420Lv4

Best Martial Peak Fanfic Ever I have read

8mth
Funny_Gamer_3397
Funny_Gamer_3397Lv1

Reveal spoiler

6mth
Wanderer_0
Wanderer_0Lv4

till now i would this is the best fanfic i have read it contains all the romance, smut, bonding btw oc and mc (like they didn't made them some kind of scum and trash ) and how the mc go through all the stuff i would go ahead and give it a try its a good one..🤘

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Zu69
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very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !

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ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

okay im not gonna read anymore as the mc is reborn into yang family and thats hella annoying we already seen the manga people read to not see the previous mc and thats how it seems, only reason people will continue will be because its the only martial peak fic no other reason pops to my head

5mth
Devendra_pal_Singh
Devendra_pal_SinghLv3

bro aren't you streching story for to long, like literally this and some of the privious chapter completely filled with unnecessary things. I was waiting for the chapter for almost 2 days and when I read it, it was completely filled with fillers, while you literally skipped his other talents like alchemy, array, and artifacts. I request you to stop doing it please because after waiting for two or three days I wish for some good and progressive chapters.

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Mysteries_Reader1
Mysteries_Reader1Lv3

Very well written! The character development is excellent, and the way he interacts with the other characters while supporting the main heroine is fantastic. I also appreciate how he takes all the opportunities that Yank Kai had while still supporting him. I hope for more chapters!

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