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2024-09-17 02:53

Mid story is a great concept but it gets boring real fast as the author is new and yapper with big indecisive character

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ClauticAuthor

Thank you for reading, sorry for the bad experience

Demi_Lovato_6729_Lv2

I guess new authors sure have a hard time here.

ClauticAuthor

i mean, it's true but at the same time not everyone can like your story

Demi_Lovato_6729_:I guess new authors sure have a hard time here.
Demi_Lovato_6729_Lv2

I agree. My friend also had the same problem once and then he gave up. Then for some reason I started writing and I enjoy it so now I just do it as a hobby. Although I feel like I do a worse job than a newbie but if it's fun who cares.

Clautic:i mean, it's true but at the same time not everyone can like your story
Demi_Lovato_6729_Lv2

this is my alt account tho 😅

Demi_Lovato_6729_:I agree. My friend also had the same problem once and then he gave up. Then for some reason I started writing and I enjoy it so now I just do it as a hobby. Although I feel like I do a worse job than a newbie but if it's fun who cares.
EyeOfSilverLv13

now for this account wow your so kind theirs no way your like kikyo kushida right? oh wait you probably won't understand that but if you do then you do but good job being kind on this account its not hard right?

Demi_Lovato_6729_:this is my alt account tho 😅
Demi_Lovato_6729_Lv2

I'm pretty sure I don't understand what you said by ok 👍😃👍

EyeOfSilver:now for this account wow your so kind theirs no way your like kikyo kushida right? oh wait you probably won't understand that but if you do then you do but good job being kind on this account its not hard right?
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