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Indian_PainterLv37mth
2024-07-30 16:18

The author had a rough start. He was dedicated to learn and rewrote his novel with much more improvement with the help of me and others. He has been constantly improving and i think his novel will become even better in the coming chapters so guys, look past the initial chapters. The author has a interesting plot in tune.

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