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2024-07-30 18:12

overall the novel has been a great experience, i have seen the author improve and work on himself which has made this story even more worthwhile. I like the fact that this story is made in a different way though the concept remains the same but I like how I see a new and a different india compared to other novels. so over i give it a 5/5 because of the efforts the author has put in after listening to our feedbacks.

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